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God damn it I age three years everytime I read this thing.You are a very very good writer.You would make a mint doing screen plays.I'd go the Indy route if I were you.Heart attack,sheer bloody heart attack.Of course Itachi isn't a bloody rape hound.I love Hinata and Sakura.You go guys ,erm,girls plus Itachi!

I absolutely love your story. I am a very big fan of the 'lets have bad things happen to Naruto' stories. It makes the good stuff so much better when there is pain on the way. I have been reading Broken as well. I think the plot for this story was impressive and well thought out. I can't wait to see what happens in the end. I think the only problem you have with your stories is the grammatical errors and spelling. Otherwise I am a VERY big fan *waves a flag emblazoned with 'arora' on it*. Unfortunately I have been too lazy to review till now, at least I told you the truth.

The main thing that made me review now instead of just waiting for the end of the story was the end of this chapter. My reaction to "No. Your dad did".... I squealed uncontrollably, my eyes widened to such a degree that I hadn't thought possible, squealed some more then screamed OMG at least 10 times in quick succession. My dad gave me a very funny look. I thought that my reaction was justified and as such felt that I should inform you. I know I like it when people tell me what they like and how they reacted.

Keep up the good work. I await the end of the story (although it will make me sad when it ends) and I also hope that new chapters of Broken will be out soon.

You are a genius I so did not expect that twist. That was so amazing. Altough I did feel bad for Sasuke. His life just really sucks. One question though. If it was the father why did Itachi kill the whole family and was the father planning to do the same with Sasuke? Was that why he was suddenly noticing his son and maybe that was the reason why Itachi finally killed him? Aside from that this is a relly great story and you are an excellent writer.

O_O OMFG! just read chap 13.... I can't even think straight! all that's running through my head is OMFG!

SASUKE'S DAD?!!! OMFG!

*freaks out s'more*

lol ^^ anyhoo... i've been reading your story as it came out, but im not sure if i reviewed before... sorry bout that! >_< but i AM now!

I love what/where you went with the story... You sure know how to keep a person enthralled! I can NOT wait to read more!

wow... super angst!!! will naruto live??? i hope so... hihihi

........... You know what, I xas never so speachless after reading a chapter, seriously, my jaw crack for droping to low! This chapter, it was fucking great!!!!!! It was, like woaw and woaw and 2 min please I need to have my sense back.. Ok, erm, I love you!!!! Everything was so perfect! As always, sure, but whoa, you killed me on this! I was so afraid that this sick bastard would rape Sasuke, well, he almost did, but he doesn't have his body pushed in him, his smell lingering and everything! And you made him really strong, he only beg when Orochimaru is going to harm Naruto. And Itachi killed him! It has always been one of my favorite way for this son of a bitch to die, by the hand of Itachi coming to rescue his little brother. And there we see that Itachi really love Sasuke, that's part his confusing at first, sort of, well Itachi is. I thought at first that he wanted to be forgiven. But he's no one to regret his actions. And the way he behave with Naruto, warm almost. But in the end he KNOW! Itachi is nothing of a bastard (well, he is, but in the same way than Sasuke) he killed his father for being the sick pedophile that raped Naruto, and certainly for other things. And now, we can only give lot of cheers for Itachi. When I think his fucking father wanted to introduce him to his world before having a bullet pull in him, eww, Sasuke would have to do this things! Now, after hating his brother for taking him the little hope he had, after fearing the death of Naruto so much and realized that he was really important to him, he's gonna piss on his father's tomb. Hope we'll see Itachi again, now my love for him has increased ten fold! His father! Never, never, I would have thought of that! You really are good! I'm sure everyone was surprised! Oh, and good thing with the relationship between Hinata and Sakura!. Hahahaha! This story is the best story ever! I could right for hours of how much I love it! But it would be boring, so I'll stop here. And I love you! Hope to see more SasuNaru action in future (the last?) chapters! Good luck! Ja ne!

Holy crap that was a good chapter!!!!!!!!!!! I love Itachi!!!!!!!!!!!! But does that mean this is going to end soon *looks sad* Please let this be a suoer long fic and write like eleven more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please!!!!!!!!!!! And update soon ^^

-The Update Monster

omg! what a twist!! i had just assumed it was itachi. guess i was wrong. lol. this is an awesome story!! i hope you update soon!! youre a good writer!!

It's a surprising twist and I liked it. I specially liked the interaction between Itachi and Sasuke, it was really heart wrenching! Anyway, I hope you make a sequel with Itachi, Sasuke and Naruto! It would be cool! Bye!

it took me all day but i fianlly read your story....waaaaa!
it is SO good much better then i could have possibly have anticipated!

thank you so much for writing and i eagerly look forward to your next release


-kri-chan