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October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So f'g cool.It ripped/Very intellegent creative use of characters.
more please.Just.........wow.Holy.
more please.Just.........wow.Holy.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is absolutely wonderful! Can't wait for more!
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i have to say that i would of never thought of that. the fact that shino used his bugs was creepy and sexy all at once. this story is very good but i couldn't bring myself to read the kiba/choji one. i just couldn't imagine it. but the sasuke/shikamaru one was great.
i can't wait for the next pairing^_^V
i can't wait for the next pairing^_^V
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg... Asa you totally rock my socks. <333333
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter! Poor Chouji, having his emotions toyed with like that. But it's definately good to see him get some action! The poor guy is somewhat neglected, I think.
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you1
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well yeehaw.This had some serious kick to it.Not a word of complaint will you hear from me.You get it.Kudos.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this fic made me went around looking for more sasushika. great fic, the characters were very IC. i like the way shikamaru thinks about stuff during the whole thing... its just so him. i liked the part about the length more than made up for that XD
write more next time.. maybe shikasasu? *.~
write more next time.. maybe shikasasu? *.~
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
was this really the first time you finished something?!?! this was so good! i loved it so much. i really thought that making it in first person was a great choice. not many people can succeed in writing the inner workings of shika's mind but you pulled it off marvelously. i loved the imagery and all of the descriptions. if only sasuke was a little less cold, but that's the way sasuke is i guess. i defintely think you should continue with a sequel, and if not, just keep writing!! keep up the good work!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
**Smirk** I have never read a Sasuke/Shikamura and while I don't actually like Sasuke, Shikamaru is my favorite character, so I had to read it anyway. I was pleasantly surprised, so many yaoi fanfics are OOC, but I could almost see this happening. I think you did a good job on this, and I hope that you continue to persue the odd pairings. Keep up the good work, and good job on this.