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for Dark Musings and Secrets in Konoha

by asagiri

person asagiri
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the kind words! I'm thinking of continuing to try my hand at these crack type pairings, and going for something as equally odd next time - a friend requested Chouji and Kankurou (though I have no idea how I'll pull that off! n_n)
person Serenia
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was fantastic! Your writing style flows nicely, and both characters seemed quite IC. There were a couple of spelling/typing errors, but nothing too major. Good work!