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for Night Dark

by coleymerrin

person Dark Phoenix
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NIIICE... Go SasuSaku lemons! Sequel please? Or just another SasuSaku?
person Dark Phoenix
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To me, a "reviewer" (READ: flamer) who doesn't even bother to leave a proper handle when flaming, and can't even spell "anonymous" in full DESERVES to have his/her post deleted. Construction criticism is one thing, paid editing is another; yours is neither. Nonsensical flaming that's completely irrelevant is what I can see of your posts. Go read something else if you're hard for gay porn--there's plenty out there. No offense to gay porn writers, we all have our personal tastes; let's not impose them on others, ne?
person Anon
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To quote something I read recently: "There are some phenomenal writers out there who ought to be encouraged to turn their hand to the original and publish - encouraging the abysmal is insulting to them...those who have something worthwhile about them learn from their negative experiences and become something
truly worth being in this world. Those who can't accept their own failings, never learn and remain beneath even shadows throughout the interminable nothingness of their lives. Encouraging a lack of learning is encouraging a general lack of worth in the world." So basically by going around deleting any reviews that don't praise you as the god you seem to think you are you are wallowing in your crappiness and unfortunately you have a bunch of idiots encouraging you to do this. And as long as you do this you shall be, and shall always remain a loser. Sorry if you don't want to face it and your readers want to encourage you to be a loser but that's what you are. A loser. So again quit writing if you can't deal with anything that criticizes your writing. And to other reviewers who are upset about my comments, unless you've read every review I've poster I don't want to hear and I really don't care about any of your comments, so you can just bite me. I'm allowed to give my opinion and as long as it's not a mindless flame the author does not have the right to delete the review. You need to take the good with the bad and not just pick and choose because you want to believe that your the best and that there is no room for improvement. I seriously hope you don't plan to write professionally or even semi-professionally because editors will tear your ass apart and unless you learn to deal with negative things now you just won't be able to deal with it and you won't make it. But you know what, I really don't care because you've already proven yourself to be a loser. Sooooooooo I will end with my usual Quit Writing and stinking up the site with your crap loser

person aoshi4misao
schedule October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very nice Sasuke/Sakura fic. It was very well written, you are very talented. Thank you for writing it, and I will look for you stuff in the future. Good job, and keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOSER!!!!!!!! No matter what other people say you will always be a loser and your story will always be crap. CRAP with a capital C. You should quit writing, go ahead, burn your books, break your pencils and pens, delete Microsoft Word off your computer because you will always be a LOSER!!
person Two Thumbs Way Up!
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, you can't still be the same anon who criticized this story again, can you? It had been already a month, and after twelve of them, we're all really getting sick of that. You actually care this much that this author deleted your reviews? They were all straight ridiculous and idiotic, truly proving how much of a loser YOU really are. There's nothing wrong about writing any pairing, or any smut including the pairing, and suddenly you go off like a human hose and waste your energy for some things so low, the kind of energy better used that could have gotten you a life.

This story is really good, you are really brilliant with the details. But I was a little twitchy about the awfully dirty words used in this story (laughs nervously), but other than that, it was really steamy. Haha. I like to see more of your work, please!
person Anon
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
One word....HOT!

-Chelsey AKA: HisBeautiful
person swtluck
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed it ... kind of a quicky but its smut not some love romance novel lol. -- its hard to find smut of sasu x saku.
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I always hated replying to my own stories, but I think it's all right this time. :0) Thank you to everyone, for your replies, and your thoughts. The last thing anyone needs is to see abuse when they click in, and I hope it will remain so. Here's to much happiness in the future. :0) My thanks again, Coley.
person Finality
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God, I love you, I love you! There just isn't enough SasuSaku loving out there. There just isn't. When I saw your story, I was about to die. Thank you for taking me out of that SasuNaru bombardation of mine. Much love! <3 Write another. :D
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