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This story is amazing and I like how the plot is working out. Please update soon and write more.

Okay I do realize that you haven't updated this in forever but I just wanted to tell you that I really enjoyed it so far and IF you ever get around to write more on it I would very much appreciate an e-mail notice. *smile*
ookami-ryuu@hotmail.com

Thanks. ^^

Hmm, I'm enjoying the story so far, and it's so old I'm sure this comment probably won't affect you, but for future reference, try using a little more common sense, or at least do some research. Do you really think a rich boy who's semi-famous would tell his full name, or even his real name, to a pimp? Also, I doubt even the most hard up dirty old hooker would charge only $20 for beat-and-fuck. In Amsterdam, with prostitution being legal and competition to drive down prices, a suck-and-fuck is 50 Euros (about $65). So a beating plus sex would probably cost more, although we're assuming Naruto is a ghetto cheap hooker, I suppose, so I say at least $50. Although even that is low if he cost $2000 for two weeks. That's about $150 a day, which I can't see him making if he charges $20 a pop for long, torturous sessions. No matter what kind of story you are writing, strive to make its details believable!

I freaking love this fic! I love angsty Naruto and all the h/c! =D please update!

Let me first say that when I found this story today I was really excited to read it because I was feeling in the mood for a story that was sad but happy too. This story captured that beautifully and really made a person feel close to the characters. Your writing is excellent and the plot keeps you on the edge waiting to see whats going to happen next.
Now I looked at when you last updated and became very sad realizing that as of yesterday you haven't updated for TWO YEARS!! Even though you wrote (and I quote):
I am bound and determined to finish it though. And for the record, I'm not going to just end it crappy to get it over with, I'm going to finish it right. (end quote)
I was really looking forward to this story only to be sorely disappointed realizing that, you did in fact abandon it. I don't know the circumstances to you deciding not to finish it. Maybe you even have a good reason to have left it unfinished. I can only hope that before you disappoint more readers with a potentially exceptional story only to realize it won't be finished that you 1. take it down. Or 2. you keep your written word and don't abandon your amazing story!
I'll keep an eye on this story for awhile and if you update, I'll be really happy and make sure I review. If you choose not too then I will abandon all hope that you plan on continuing this just like I'm sure many others have.
If this is taken as a harsh review, well it's not meant too. I'm just stating facts. Your story is great, you claimed you would finish it, but it's been two years since your last update. You shouldn't write something like that if you don't mean it!

This story is fun! *happy dance*

WOW. Awesome story.

You know I troll this site regularly and I have never actually read this story. How on earth did that happen?

So...what's the deal with Itachi, will he make this a triangle?

The NaruSasu closet blow job during the GaaNeji blow job is a stroke of fanfiction genius. I had to read that twice to make sure I wasn't imagining it. It's my OT4, you see, so it made me very happy to read.

Please continue.

Wow this is a really amazing story. I'm not sure when the last time your updated was, but I've really enjoyed it so far and I would love it if you'd continue.

Please update? ;____;

I really like this fic. I love how even though Naruto's been abused, he still remains IC (as much as possible, given the circumstances). A "softer" Sasuke still seems kind of odd to me, but with the different experiences he's had, it seems plausible at least. I am INSANELY curious to know who Kakashi had at his place. XD Smooth writing style, good dialogue, overall a solid work of fanfiction. I can't wait to find out what happens next.

I'd like to get updates: morbidreamscape@gmail.com