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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story just keeps getting better and better!!! It is amazing what you are doing with this story line. Keep up the good work, and I love your insite into the nature of people. great job!!!!
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November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, as usual, a great chapter! Smut, reflexion, talk, progressing of the plot and humor.
First: smut. Yes! Some SasuNaru sex, finally! Youhoo! A little sad it was so quick.
Second: reflexion. There's some evolution in their feelings, love is bloosoming in their heart little by little, that's good, not too quick but not too long either.
Third: talk. Sasuke finally told Naruto about the tape and his past! You're giong to make us hate Itachi more and more each time. The fact he told Naruto show he begin to trust him enought to open a little (no, a lot, that's not a little thing) more.
At last: humor. Shit, the last part was hilarious! Both acting like virgin teenagers and getting caught by Hinata! You really are terrible!
Love ya so much! Good luck!
Ps: NejiGaara smut, yeah! I don't look forward to see Sakura and Lee, Lee tend in getting on my nerves and seeing Sakura oggling over Sasuke (well, that's it, if she's not with Lee) is just ewww.
First: smut. Yes! Some SasuNaru sex, finally! Youhoo! A little sad it was so quick.
Second: reflexion. There's some evolution in their feelings, love is bloosoming in their heart little by little, that's good, not too quick but not too long either.
Third: talk. Sasuke finally told Naruto about the tape and his past! You're giong to make us hate Itachi more and more each time. The fact he told Naruto show he begin to trust him enought to open a little (no, a lot, that's not a little thing) more.
At last: humor. Shit, the last part was hilarious! Both acting like virgin teenagers and getting caught by Hinata! You really are terrible!
Love ya so much! Good luck!
Ps: NejiGaara smut, yeah! I don't look forward to see Sakura and Lee, Lee tend in getting on my nerves and seeing Sakura oggling over Sasuke (well, that's it, if she's not with Lee) is just ewww.
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your fic. and I love Naruto/Sasuke lemons and stuff, but could you write in a Neji/Gaara lemon. Please!! And update soon!!
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg gaara is soooo funny in this! and dominate naruto is definitly hot! please update asap!!
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
bwahahahahaha paypal lol omg too funny
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT VERY
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November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKED CHPAPTER 10 SO YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON NO NOW
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
grrrrrrrrrr...evil cliffhangers...anywayz awsome chapter i absolutly loved this one...expecially at the end poor sasuke he's at the mercy of naruto. anywayz update soon
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November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely~~!! Hee... Can't wait for the next chapter, and Shikamaru's reaction to the tape x_X!
~sephykoi
~sephykoi
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I dont remember if I reviewed this or not.....
in anycase please continue I dont read many fanfics anymore
that actually make me want to read them over and over again...
sooooo PLEASE continue if not for your fans for my SANITY ><
in anycase please continue I dont read many fanfics anymore
that actually make me want to read them over and over again...
sooooo PLEASE continue if not for your fans for my SANITY ><