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greetings!
first off, the dialouges in this chapter were a bit wordy, and some of the explanations as well.
secondly, gaara is waaaay ooc. i mean, i wont hold it against you, since this being an AU and all, but it really kills his image.
another thing - everything in the living room scene seemed a bit too friendly and casual - and i'm sorry if i'm not making sense, but it kinda dragged everything else.
and - i absolutely LOVE the Real Naruto. Yeah bebeh!
XD
please dont think i'm going out of my way to dsis this, because i'm not, in truth i really² love this ficcie and even tho my major exams are a week away i still couldnt resist going online to check whether you've updated (and you have! =D ) - that's how much i truly enjoy this piece of yours.
and something's nagging at me - did something really happen when the electricity went off, or is that an irrevelant detail? XD
thanks for updating!

p.s: the whole thing abt authos begging for reviews, well, i dont really like it when an author leaves the fic with a "No review no update" line, but then again it's really up to the author, innit? ...well, it's actually up to the reader, whether to leave a review or not, but then again...eh? what was the subject again? >_< sorry..kinda drifted off..
=P
update!
*gives chocolates*

I would just like to say that I love this story. Should you stop writing this due to "lack of reviews" or some other suck nonsense, I will be forced into desolate isolation for the remainder of my days. Keep going, and much love!

what a great story....
hope you dont neglect your fanfic......
i love it

I think you have been doing an amazing job with this story. The atmosphere is tangible and the characters are concrete. It is really difficult to find an amusing, down to earth fanfiction that is well thought out and excellently executed. . . . .but you have managed to do all that and more. Sadly to say, one of the biggest thrills for me is the spelling and grammer: I've yet to encounter a single spelling or gramatical error in you fanfiction, and not only is this encouraging, but also gives me faith that someone cares enough to make the writing of their fanfiction flawless. The storyline is intriging and involving, the setting is up to date and real, and your words are fluid and don't distract the reader with faulty lines or out of character dialogue. You have also managed to capture injured innocence and the results of physical and psychological trauma very well indeed. All in all, I wish to congratulate you on a superior fanfiction, and i look forward to reading your story right to the end. Thank you for writing something so delightfull to read. Sincerely, Ruby

omfg.. this chapter was great, I love tsunde so much.. Ive only seen her in the anime for a sec.. I hope shes great like in this!! And omfg.. Gaara is teh king of sex.. and hes in leather chaps?! omfg orgasmatic!!!! aaahh when naruto kun ordered sasuke to lay down.. uber hot.. meewh I think your a great writeer.. i cant wait till you update again.. ahh!!! This fic is so freakin awsome!!! *squeal*

Neji and Sasuke are so protective of Hinata, it's so cute ^^ I really like this story and it's really great that you're able to stay so committed. However, I think the breakup of Neji and Sasuke is a bit messy (but it's not the focus of the story so it's all right) because I was under the impression that Neji is the one who didn't want to take things further. Anyway, I LOVE Gaara in leather! I bet HE'S SO HAWT! ^^ Neji is so lucky. The pace of the story is wonderful, we're actually moving along without feeling rushed. Great job and I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!

Well I just finished reading all that you have posted. Usually, I do NOT like AU fics, but this one is well done so it doesn't bother me at all. I really hope you update soon because I can't wait to see where this is all going.

Huzzah for standing up for reviews! Reviews in general are difficult to come by and I do try to leave them when I'm not in an overtly cynical mood. Which is...rare but it does happen. But I'm glad you're sorting Issues in the story which are not normally sorted, and I'm very tickled that you had a nod to Draco Veritas. Heh. Hilarious. Some funny moments in this chapter but mostly of the excellent plot and development. The "real" Naruto's appearance is very interesting. More random praise here, I am rather tired but I'm going to continue this spleal. The Kiba/Hinata is well done, and the Gaara/Neji is hilarious. Hopefully we get more development into the Sasuke/Naruto part rather than the meandering now (while entertaining, story-wise is somewhat on a tangent.) The video investigation is somewhat slooow..

I'm glad you're still writing this. Overall good job. Readability points, yay. Have some cookies.

~Aerin

This is not gonna be a long review, as you like them, but hopefully it will be a good one nontheless. This is seriously my favourite fic on AFF. I keep coming back every day, hoping you've added another chapter. I usually the shy, silent type, but I read what you said about the importance of reviews to author, so I just had to make a quick comment.
I really really love this story, please update. Pretty please.
(However, it was kinda mean that you ended the chapter before the hot sex. Not cool. Now I'm going to act like a crazy drug addict until you release the next chapter.)

I WUV this story, keep going it rocks!