rate_review Reviews

I loved the whole Kiba bit. Everything he said I would imagine him saying in the anime/manga, so kudos to you. I'm definitely looking forward to the dinner, cause your last dinner was really funny. I am really enjoying this story so far, so do indeed keep writing.

I haven't seen that guy that you spoke of with the reviews, but I agree with you. Reviews definately help keep an author motiviated because then you know that people are indeed reading and either enjoy it or want to help give you ideas and such. But don't let him or her get to you. it's just not worth the time and trouble.

The Real Naruto is erm...rather forceful *grins* but, I think I like him too *winks* keep up the good work, I look forward to the next chapter.

"I think they're quite tasteful," Shikamaru said seriously. "I just hope the cowboy stripper you stole them from doesn't find out where you live."

Ahhh, I love you! You got the smart ass thing down perfectly! *sighs* There's nothing better to read than a well done Shikamaru (in my opinion, but I'll admit I'm a bit biased).

Alright, I'll try to keep the Shika gushing to a minimum and review your actual story. I was REALLY hoping that they'd get to answer the rest of those questions Kakashi gave in this chapter, but I guess we'll have to wait until the next one, ne? I'm sure Naruto's first sexual experience was horrible, but I'm actually curious not only about Sasuke's first, but Naruto's reaction to it. I'm assuming that it was Itachi, and that he was fairly young, which will show Naruto that he and Sasuke have something in common. I still can't wait to see how you bring Itachi into this, but that's just because I love the little psycho.

I liked the conflict over the "boyfriend" thing, as I'm sure that's something we're ALL wondering at this point: Just what type of relationship do they have? Sasuke's reasons for not defining it as such so far are good ones, I think. As for Naruto... gotta love him at the end. That was pretty hot. *fans self*

Great work, once again, and I'll look forward to more!

maybe the person going around complaining about author's asking for reviews is mad because their stories suck so bad that nobody reviews them. I don't know why it would bug them so much. Even when authors ask for reviews, I personally only review if I really want to. Then again, I rarely ask for reviews....meh.

But yeah! Great chapter! I liked the whole idea of Sasuke attacking Kakashi. That had me smiling.

Again a good chapter. A lot of talk and action. I don't understand, Sasuke's weaker than Kakashi but stronger than Zabuza? Well, ok. Naruto does not know it is porn on internet, that's funny, and so like him. When Naruto say he wants to have is way on Sasuke, I hope is not gonna fuck him again, but make him fuck him. Too much NaruSasu's gonna depress me. But I like the way Naruto tell him to shut up for once, after all this talk (I don't talk only of this chapter) and mind torturing some mind blowing sex just for the sake of it is good. Gaara in leather chaps? I don't know if I have to laugh or to drool. Could you put some witness by Sasuke or Naru or both of some NejiGaara sex too? It would be good. Hope Naruto won't be mad by what Sasuke has to tell him. And Naruto prefering to screw to some talking? Well, Sasuke made him a perv! Just hope we'll see him riding Sasuke and not fucking him. Good luck! Ja ne!

Asking for reviews is OK by me. I hope you don't end the story lamely, it's going great. I like the new Naruto though, let's see what kind of kinky things he can do to make Sasuke beg :D. I hope Naruto doesn't meet up with any of those guys that raped him in the alley when he starts to work for Tsunade, I don't think he'd survive that, although I feel a showdown with Itachi coming up.

More, More, More (drools on laptop) Really good story I kinda really hope the guy is not Itachi (cause he is my fav) but deep deep deep down I know it is and I will accept that so that I can continue reading this story.

Wow.

Oringally I was unsure of what to think, but now I actually like it.
It's nice to know that when life sucks and things are bad, some good things can come your way.

Keep up the awesome work.

So was Naruto's 'master' just an oc or was it someone in the series?
What about Itachi, is he the feared man?
Why did he pick Naruto and not some other dark haired kid who could call him 'Aniki'?

Love the story, coolsa.

that a really kool story i cant wait til you finish it so please do soon i hell what to knw whats going to happen next so hurry

Awesome story. Glad you updated. I think you do a good job of dealing with the issues seriously but not making the story depressing. Thanks for writing.