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October 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your chapter are longer! It's good! I like to see random characters of the Naruto casting, I don't like oc. It's progressing well. I don't really like being bottom (ok, I don't like it at all) but I understand why he does it and you make it clear he prefer to top, so it's ok, exept that he's a screamer, just hope that was the only one time tough. That's so cool Sasuke bought him definitely! I wonder when Itachi will come again, just the idea give me chills. I think you won your huge by chibi Naru-chan. Good luck!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been reading and loving this story. Sorry about not reviewing earlier. RL has a way of eating and chewing out out! I'm really sorry to see the way that Naruto had been treated. I'm really glad that Sasuke offered to bottom! So sweet! Be patiently waiting for the next chapter!!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was halarious! I can't believe Naruto would be able to rememer all that and guess it. As for Sasuke, love the middle name, though it might also be Naruto's too. Anyways.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i was floored that Saske bottomed. omigosh!!!!! I do like how Naruto showed he was soooo smart. great job! pls can i have another chapter. i love to get your e-mail saying another chapter is up. YEAH!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another great chapter. the lemon was awesome. ^_^ and I love how you did Tsunade. she was great.
can't wait for the next chapter.
can't wait for the next chapter.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay!
update!
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lovely.
tho i must point out, gaara is really ooc in this! >_< gomen!
anyway~
loved the lemon, please have more! =D
update!
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lovely.
tho i must point out, gaara is really ooc in this! >_< gomen!
anyway~
loved the lemon, please have more! =D
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the new chapter i also like the fact that you put other charectors in this to.I loking forward to then next chapt.
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. The story just keeps getting better and better. I like where the plot is going and I like the way you are introducing the character. Great job!!!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! that was amazing! I kinda wish Sasuke had been on top though... gosh i never thought i'd say that in this lifetime. I usually love fics where naruto is on top but with your fic, it just seemed more appropriate that sasuke would be. but it was a nifty surprise! great job with this chapter! God i love your fic so much! And thanks for continuing to email me the updates! I cant wait to read the next one! ^_^
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely!! And THANK YOU that you made Sasuke bottom the first time!! Naruto really needed it and I HATE when the traditional fan fics when they never switch who's top or bottom. You are an exellent writer