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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!!! ^-^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad he was brougth for good but i'm not so sure about what sasuke is doing he did'nt ask naruto how he felt about it but all in all i still freakin lov this story plz update soon
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I <3 this story so much!!! Poor Woobie!Naruto... I know Sasuke will take good care of him though...
And Jesus, Itachi's been fucking w/ Naruto since he was 9? Ugh. That's another thing Sasuke needs to take care of.
I can't wait for more!!!!
Thanks for the email updates! You rock!
*kiss*
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
And Jesus, Itachi's been fucking w/ Naruto since he was 9? Ugh. That's another thing Sasuke needs to take care of.
I can't wait for more!!!!
Thanks for the email updates! You rock!
*kiss*
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just tried to leave you feedback and aff freaked out on me... Try #2:
I really, really <3 this story! Poor Woobie!Naruto! Sasuke will take care of him, I'm sure...
And Itachi's been fucking w/ Naruto since he was 9? Sasuke needs to take care of that as well.
Thanks for the email updates! You rock!
*kiss*
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
I really, really <3 this story! Poor Woobie!Naruto! Sasuke will take care of him, I'm sure...
And Itachi's been fucking w/ Naruto since he was 9? Sasuke needs to take care of that as well.
Thanks for the email updates! You rock!
*kiss*
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay try #3. You rock. This story rocks. I can't wait for more!
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
xoxo,
Monica ^__^
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Some parts of the story have me totally green faced... aka, actually I don't like it at all...
No, no, don't take me the wrong way here... that's just me... I'm a bit deflective against toooooo much angsty things...
The story itself is very well written, it takes hold of you and even if you don't like the set-up-scenario, you can't help it - you must finish the chapter. Now that I say - that is writing skills. To take hold of a reader, even if the reader doesn't like the set up, and yet you can't seem to stop reading. That takes a skill beyond words.
And yet, this last chapter - learn how to count money with the help of poker... hey, that's how I was learned how to count as well!!
And YES - very good written story, enjoyable even though the angst sometimes get to me... but hey, it's still very good!!
No, no, don't take me the wrong way here... that's just me... I'm a bit deflective against toooooo much angsty things...
The story itself is very well written, it takes hold of you and even if you don't like the set-up-scenario, you can't help it - you must finish the chapter. Now that I say - that is writing skills. To take hold of a reader, even if the reader doesn't like the set up, and yet you can't seem to stop reading. That takes a skill beyond words.
And yet, this last chapter - learn how to count money with the help of poker... hey, that's how I was learned how to count as well!!
And YES - very good written story, enjoyable even though the angst sometimes get to me... but hey, it's still very good!!
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October 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great chatper! I really liked that Sasuke bought Naruto outright, and love Naruto's reaction ^____^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Pelase update soon!
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October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woooooooooooooow...never expected THAT to come up...but there was something fishy about the whole deal...hmmmmm...someone that looked like Naruto? See, now I'm curious. Or maybe he DID do it, or, to be more exact, one of his multiple personalities did it!!!!!!
*cough cough* Anyway, I absolutely LOVED the fluffy SasuNaru in there. ^_^ I think sometimes authors don't ever focus enough on the fluffy before getting down to the hardcore stuff, y'know?
*cough cough* Anyway, I absolutely LOVED the fluffy SasuNaru in there. ^_^ I think sometimes authors don't ever focus enough on the fluffy before getting down to the hardcore stuff, y'know?
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is great! ooooo I wonder who it is... well update so I know! please?