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June 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is probably around my fifth or sixth time reading this story again! I just love it so much and it is my all-time most favourite story! I really hope you didn't decide to stop writing...I know how it feels to not want to write. But you have many reveiwers that are just waiting for another update just like me too! So please update?
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March 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What an incredible story. Please continue this! I cant wait to see what will happen next!!!
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February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi there...I just wanted to let you know that I LOVE THIS STORY so far...[= I've always been somewhat of a fan of the whole Sasuke saving Naruto type of thing, which is different from the anime itself lol. I also found the dynamics of friendship between Sasuke and Hinata very interesting...definitely is not a common theme so it's really nice to actually see it. The Iruka being a priest and not technically "not lying" to Sasuke about having seen Naruto was purely/wickedly intelligent and down right hilarious. I really hope you do continue with this story because I can't express enough how great it is ^O^!! Great job!! [=
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February 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I just need you let you know that this fic is THE MOST AWESOMEST read for me in MONTHS!! Your story had touched me so deeply, (and I mean seriously deep to the inner core of my heart that was ripped in pieces man...), and I absolutely LOVE it! Sasuke and Naruto are so meant for each other here, and I hope everything will turn out well for them in the end. I must admit, I did cry a bit in a few places... T__T It's so very touching and heartbreaking. On Naruto's end of course. D: Please please please continue writing this story. I cannot wait to read more! This has been a huge inspiration for me and my art. Thank you so very much for writing and sharing this wonderful read. You def deserve so much love and reviews. :D
Gwyllion
Gwyllion
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February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
and things get complicated... Itachi is back and he hasn't even told Naruto everything yet. It'd be funny to see Hinata go up against itachi when she's in 'frightening mode' :-P and poor Hinata... overprotective familymembers...brrr... I pity her alongside Sasuke and Naruto :-P
I hope you feel like writing here soon again... or else find a different site where you want to post?
I hope you feel like writing here soon again... or else find a different site where you want to post?
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January 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story its awesome and I hope you update soon
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January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love your story so far i havent finish all yet though but i just really wanted to say something about your 'rant'.i think you authors deserve the reviews everyone and heve the right to ask for them.oh and again i love your story keep it up!!!****
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January 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok so i have a LOT of coursework to do, but i had this bright idea, that INSTEAD of doing the ton i have due for monday, i'd read the first chapter of your story first, then get on with it, but i kinda read all 12 chapters.. in one go XD i really enjoyed the story, i like the little bits of humour you've added in now and again, i think a bit more humour would do the story good, just to balance out all the angst,
the characters are slightly OOC as naruto isnt half as loud and sasuke... well he kinda disturbs me with all the niceness, also naruto is very ukeish (even when he was being top that first time round) just sometimes the sweetness is a bit sickly, i hope its ok that im commenting on this, because i did truly enjoy this story, but you did say that reviews helped, and i've never given a proper review before, so i hope this helps with the story. i would really LOVE it if you continued, and i cant wait for an update!!
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the characters are slightly OOC as naruto isnt half as loud and sasuke... well he kinda disturbs me with all the niceness, also naruto is very ukeish (even when he was being top that first time round) just sometimes the sweetness is a bit sickly, i hope its ok that im commenting on this, because i did truly enjoy this story, but you did say that reviews helped, and i've never given a proper review before, so i hope this helps with the story. i would really LOVE it if you continued, and i cant wait for an update!!
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December 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh! This is wonderful! I canna wait to read more. *Smirks*...and lass, this review isna forced.
Keep up the great work,
SeveredWings
Keep up the great work,
SeveredWings
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November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS IS THE GREATEST STORY EVER!!! I can't wait until the next chapter comes out, it's just too amazing. Please, please, please let me know when the next one gets posted!
HK
HK