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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter:) I especialy liked the bit at the end when Naruto tells Sasuke "I'm saying no." I think that will go a long way towards buliding up some trust.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love the dinner with the two couples, as they're my fav pairings, and the joke is good! Naru-chan's gonna speak about Itachi, it's about time! Ican't wait to read this! Is Hinata gonna have somebody? (Tenten maybe? Hahaha!) Be good, don't torture them so much! Love ya! Good luck! Ja ne!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awsome job!! This is story is sooo cool. I love how you are handeling the elements of this story. This is a great work.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter yet again! Hot kissing scenes too :D This is getting very interesting indeed.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Needs some more citrus :D
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh, yes... just what I needed after a long night of up running up and down four flights of stairs for tornado warnings. If they hadn't been checking dorm rooms so thoroughly to make sure people were actually going downstairs, I'd have hidden in the closet.
Anyway... another great chapter. I'm intrigued by what exactly happened between Naruto and that girl. As much as none of us want to think that Naruto would rape anyone, past experiences could have caused him to snap. But I'm sure there's a reasonable explanation for what happened, and I know Sasuke won't hold it against him.
And, yes! Finally more on the Itachi issue! I'm a huge fan of Uchihacest, especially lovely, one-sided, evil!Itachi Uchihacest, so I love you for this. I know it's not going to be a pairing in the story, but I like the way you've used it as something that happened to Sasuke in the past (if I'm remembering correctly, that is. If not, I sound like an idiot right now, and for the next few sentences, but I'm used to that). Maybe he'll be able to tell Naruto about it sometime? It would be nice for Naruto to know that Sasuke's been there, though I have a feeling that it will take a lot to get Sasuke to talk to anyone about that, even to Naruto.
Sasuke's apology to Neji was surprising, but not out of character, really. He's gone through a lot of subtle changes in the short amount of time that he's been around Naruto, and I think that may have led to him finally being able to get along with Neji again, which makes me happy. *grins* And I absolutely love Gaara. His toast, and what he said right before he left, about he and Neji not having had sex in the past four hours. Excellent. You've given him so much character. I'll never forget him asking "Suke-chan" not to deny his love for him. That made my day, really (...which is sad, when I think about it).
Finally, your writing style is excellent, as always. You move from one thing to the next smoothly, and the dialogue between the characters is so... real. I shall envy you for all eternity, glory and honor and praise, amen.
And on that-- probably disturbing-- note, I leave with the hopes of a quick update. XD
Anyway... another great chapter. I'm intrigued by what exactly happened between Naruto and that girl. As much as none of us want to think that Naruto would rape anyone, past experiences could have caused him to snap. But I'm sure there's a reasonable explanation for what happened, and I know Sasuke won't hold it against him.
And, yes! Finally more on the Itachi issue! I'm a huge fan of Uchihacest, especially lovely, one-sided, evil!Itachi Uchihacest, so I love you for this. I know it's not going to be a pairing in the story, but I like the way you've used it as something that happened to Sasuke in the past (if I'm remembering correctly, that is. If not, I sound like an idiot right now, and for the next few sentences, but I'm used to that). Maybe he'll be able to tell Naruto about it sometime? It would be nice for Naruto to know that Sasuke's been there, though I have a feeling that it will take a lot to get Sasuke to talk to anyone about that, even to Naruto.
Sasuke's apology to Neji was surprising, but not out of character, really. He's gone through a lot of subtle changes in the short amount of time that he's been around Naruto, and I think that may have led to him finally being able to get along with Neji again, which makes me happy. *grins* And I absolutely love Gaara. His toast, and what he said right before he left, about he and Neji not having had sex in the past four hours. Excellent. You've given him so much character. I'll never forget him asking "Suke-chan" not to deny his love for him. That made my day, really (...which is sad, when I think about it).
Finally, your writing style is excellent, as always. You move from one thing to the next smoothly, and the dialogue between the characters is so... real. I shall envy you for all eternity, glory and honor and praise, amen.
And on that-- probably disturbing-- note, I leave with the hopes of a quick update. XD
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG that was a great chapter.. AND GAARA IS ORGASMAITC!! you make him so sexy!! ah.. hello kitty shirt.. the sex... i lvoe gaara.. rawr.. the scene in teh cab was HOT that kiss was sexy.. awsome description.. and the cab driver! XD that was funny! ahh i lveo your story! i cant wait till you update!
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was fsckin' amazing! *squeals* you rock! I can't wait for the next update! *passes out from excitement*
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT CHAPTER. I really am looking forward to the next one. Please email me when you finish the next chapter!
Michrure@hotmail.com
Michrure@hotmail.com
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wai!! this is sooo good!! please update it soon...i really wanna know whats gonna happen next...oi, what a cliffhanger! >_<;