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for It's a Hard Knock Life

by Tatemshope

person Seto\'s Darkness
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
T______T poor Naruto *cries* Sasuke, I know you can help Naruto!!!! This story is so depressing, angsty, sad... and yeah. T___T And I'm assuming that Itachi *hurt/raped* Sasuke when he was young and *hurt/raped* Naruto as well, right? Ahhh!!! As much as I love Itachi--he just can't hurt Sasuke or Naruto!!!! *glares* Hehehe... Anyway, that was really cute of Sasuke to become so concerned and involved for a stranger-in-the-first-place like Naruto. But you made Naruto into such a..a.. cowardly-shivering man!!! Though it IS certainly justified, with his past-life in your AU. All in all, GREAT job!!!

Now I want to kill those men who abused Naruto... *growl*

MORE of your fantastic story!!! ^_______________^

>>Seto's Darkness<<
person bhodi li
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh... *sob sob sob* poor Naruto! Sasuke better keep him! ((waving fist in air angrily)) Hopefully, Naruto gets some good loving soon. =)
person hogo-chan
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great update! so but it really showed just how much sasuke cares! I would love it if you could emial me the updates! I love your fic!
person luthorlover
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I <3 this story so much!!! I'd really like to be notified when you update it again, if you don't mind!
I love your characterizations!

xoxo,
Monica ^__^
person luthorlover
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why but it deleted my review. *shakes fist at aff*
Anyway, I love this story. Please update regularly. A lot. Please?
And I'd love an email when you update as well!
*hugs you and poor woobie!naruto*

xoxo,
Monica ^_^
person nicole
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad you updated sad but good chapter
person Zig
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...you really are keeping this fic great!!! What suprises me most is that I LIKE both Sasuke and Naruto in it...Usually I get fed up with one of them because they are described so stereothypical. Sasuke the possesiv asshole and Naruto the super weepy uke that just cling to Sasuke emediately to feel "safe"
But you don't do that, you give the character development some time, and is doing great in showing the trust issues that exist at the same time that you are building a relationship between the two that's just adorable.
I read some of the other reviews, and I do agree with "oOKeairaOo" that some fics go overboard with the angst (I even think I know witch fic she is refering to) but I don't think there is a risk that you'll do that. I might be totaly of here, but for me this fic is more about putting people back together again AFTER all the shit has happned rather that just describing all the pain as it happends... (please correct me if Im wrong) Ok, I do realise that everything isn't over yet (I'm still expecting Itachi to come and play his evil part) but still this story is'nt about reveling in pain and that is something else I love about it!!!
Wow I talk to much....I'll just shut up now:D
person Nakuo Shiatsu
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. This is great! I love this storyline. You have good writing skills and your grammer could use a little work, but other than that, Shmah! It's GREAT!!! I would so be willing to buy Naruto for his whole life, and I'd give him pocky everyday. If he came with Gaara or Sasuke or even Neji! I would love it even more! Your story's GREAT!!! heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh heh... OK I think that's enough of that.
WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person redfox9t
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That goodness Sauske found Naruto. And sorry but I don't care how tired you are you MUST UPDATE NOW! I can't wait till next chapter please don't keep us waiting long.
-Love your number one fan
person didi kat
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You can't just leave me hanging like that!!! Poor li'l Naru-chan. *weeps* What happened to him? What was he going to confess? Please, Please, PLEASE!!! Update again soon.