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for It's a Hard Knock Life

by Tatemshope

person Cassius
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated, joy and happiness! I love the chapter and I'll love to see how the story proceeds! once again kep up the good work!
person fyredevyl
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! You have to keep writing. If you don't, I'll kick your ass!
Not really, but I'd be really upset. Continue please. You have a really great style of writing with no mistakes.
I'll keep a look out for your next chapter.
person Kai
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FIND NARUTO!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!!!! SASUKE YOU IDIOT!!!!!
AND WHILE YOU'RE AT IT, TELL NARUTO ABOUT YOUR OWN MOLESTATION!!!!!!!
GRRR!!!!!
LOVE YA!
Kai
person Stranj100
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but a violently valiant Sasuke makes me smile. I'm really enjoying this fic. Keep it up.
person jaaf
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! This makes my day :D I really liked this chapter. Keep writing, this is evolving into an awesome fic.
person whoa
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SCREAMS*

I screamed!

SCREAMED.

You must continue! When Sasuke slammed that assholes FACE into the TABLE. Omg that was so freaking awesome. I can't comprehend the awesomeness. I ACTED IT OUT. AHAHHA. OMG I LOVE IT.
person Mich
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes. Another great chapter. And the whole thing with Sasuke beating up all those guys just gave me the biggest smile ever. Thank you so much for updating, and I hope another one comes out soon. I check the link everyday! *giggle* I hope that Naruto is alright. It would be kind of funny if he was like standing at a food booth, trying to read the menu trying to order something. That would be very cute. He'd be all, "UHH...Can I have that preety bowl of noodles with the chopsticks and that spirl looking thingy?"

I love you. Please write more soon. *prays for Naru-chan*
person dark mousy
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon update soon. please!!!!!!! XD hopes naruto-kun is alright.
person Zig
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this and I love you for writing it!!! I think you are building this story very well, and your characters are great!! Sasuke whos no saint, and really fucked up in a way, but still a really good person, and Naruto who is even more fucked up but still not just a constant crybabay. And then there is their relasionship, witch is slowly building in to something very sweet, not just the typical "Magical healing sex" that just solves everything in 3 seconds. And consent, THANK YOU for not making this a "Sasuke buys Naruto and fucks him right away, Naruto discoveres that he likes it...the end"
person lo
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This, I think is my favorite chapter. I love how the story is going. Great work, keep it up!!