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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You updated, joy and happiness! I love the chapter and I'll love to see how the story proceeds! once again kep up the good work!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! You have to keep writing. If you don't, I'll kick your ass!
Not really, but I'd be really upset. Continue please. You have a really great style of writing with no mistakes.
I'll keep a look out for your next chapter.
Not really, but I'd be really upset. Continue please. You have a really great style of writing with no mistakes.
I'll keep a look out for your next chapter.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FIND NARUTO!!!!! AHHHHHH!!!!!!!! SASUKE YOU IDIOT!!!!!
AND WHILE YOU'RE AT IT, TELL NARUTO ABOUT YOUR OWN MOLESTATION!!!!!!!
GRRR!!!!!
LOVE YA!
Kai
AND WHILE YOU'RE AT IT, TELL NARUTO ABOUT YOUR OWN MOLESTATION!!!!!!!
GRRR!!!!!
LOVE YA!
Kai
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't know why, but a violently valiant Sasuke makes me smile. I'm really enjoying this fic. Keep it up.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! This makes my day :D I really liked this chapter. Keep writing, this is evolving into an awesome fic.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SCREAMS*
I screamed!
SCREAMED.
You must continue! When Sasuke slammed that assholes FACE into the TABLE. Omg that was so freaking awesome. I can't comprehend the awesomeness. I ACTED IT OUT. AHAHHA. OMG I LOVE IT.
I screamed!
SCREAMED.
You must continue! When Sasuke slammed that assholes FACE into the TABLE. Omg that was so freaking awesome. I can't comprehend the awesomeness. I ACTED IT OUT. AHAHHA. OMG I LOVE IT.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes. Another great chapter. And the whole thing with Sasuke beating up all those guys just gave me the biggest smile ever. Thank you so much for updating, and I hope another one comes out soon. I check the link everyday! *giggle* I hope that Naruto is alright. It would be kind of funny if he was like standing at a food booth, trying to read the menu trying to order something. That would be very cute. He'd be all, "UHH...Can I have that preety bowl of noodles with the chopsticks and that spirl looking thingy?"
I love you. Please write more soon. *prays for Naru-chan*
I love you. Please write more soon. *prays for Naru-chan*
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon update soon. please!!!!!!! XD hopes naruto-kun is alright.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this and I love you for writing it!!! I think you are building this story very well, and your characters are great!! Sasuke whos no saint, and really fucked up in a way, but still a really good person, and Naruto who is even more fucked up but still not just a constant crybabay. And then there is their relasionship, witch is slowly building in to something very sweet, not just the typical "Magical healing sex" that just solves everything in 3 seconds. And consent, THANK YOU for not making this a "Sasuke buys Naruto and fucks him right away, Naruto discoveres that he likes it...the end"
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This, I think is my favorite chapter. I love how the story is going. Great work, keep it up!!