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for It's a Hard Knock Life

by Tatemshope

person ku
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omgosh! I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
person sailor red
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying your fic. The whole "Pretty Woman" storyline is probably my favorite thing to see integrated into fanfiction. Thank you so much for writing this, and please continue as soon as you can. ^^ I'll definately be looking out for an update. ^^
person exrxr
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, kakashi's second job is so funny.

i love this fic, even though a bit sad with naruto's situation and all but still good!!! i hope sasuke's able to help naruto out of his shell and that he doesn't have to endure anymore tortures of any kind. naruto really needs a lifesaver (or god?) right now.

i hope you update soon! i can't wait to see what happens next!
person bhodi li
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh..it's soooo sad..poor naruto...please find him soon *hint for an update* (wink) i am really saddened by Naruto's plight, i hope that Sasuke fixes him soon =)
person Trekiael
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good, again. Some action. Sasuke fight for Naruto! Go, break his nose of this son of a b...! Noooo! Sasuke lost Naru-chan! Find him and fu- hum hug him! So Itachi actually touched Sas', hum? Hope they'll talk about it soon! You're so great. Can I f- hum ki- ahem hug you? Haha, good luck! Ja!
person Leasan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally! A new chap!! God, I'm adicted to your story...
And the reason is it's so damn good!!
Like that part with trust exercise! Or when Sasuke got pissed off and started naming Naruto's personalities and the blond gave his 'analysis' of Sasuke's!
But how could he lost the blond angel?! I hope nothing terrible happens to him! He's got enough!!!
And please update soon, sooooooooon! Oh, if you could see the joy and excitement every time I see this story's title at the top of aff page... And the disappointment whenever it's NOT there!
Well, if you did then you would update daily!!!... Ahh, that'd be so sweet... * drifts into a dreamland*
person Trekiael
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just reread my prvious review, so you did make Naruto do a blowjob to Sasuke! But they stop before he could finish! Poor Sasu-chan! What a torture! I love how angry you make Sasuke! Oh, I forgot I've already reviewed! I stop here so. Ja!
person Cassius
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wondefully written, can't wait to the next chapter! keep up the good work!
person Kori Nibiki
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I had actually been putting off reading this fic for a while. But then, what the hell. So, I read what you've got so far. And I am liking what you've done so far. I haven't read this take on the Naruto world before and it's quite interesting. Keep up the new plotline. Looking forward to the next update. Ja!
person blisblop
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad you got assistace,its all about love eh? Love this,poor Sasuke.A N I K I .Oh Itachi ,we have your number baby.I like it.Well burning your toys with cigs is counter productive you dunce!I must say I can't wait till he meets Sasuke.I don't suppose you can have those two getting off or a flashback,non burning/raping flash back???????I am insane for the bros.Sasuke should just give in to Naruto,the guy needs comfort/a sence of control.This is happening(old term I know but so am I).Ripping story.