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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOh, That was a good chapter!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omigosh...Naruto is soooo sad...i just wanna cry and beat up his "adoptive parents"...**sniffle sniffle** please don't let Naruto go back to his old life...darn..he only has 2 weeks with Sasuke.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the chapter ^_^ Naruto does sound like he has mood-swings, but given that he's spent his life as a hooker, that's pretty understandable.
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a heavy atmosphere!Poor Naruto!!!Will we have a chapter about what happened to him and his family soon???*Who is this famous black haired man?*And about what happened to Sasuke?Geeez Hinata is just too kind ant cute!!!>v<
Please update as soon as you can^^!
Please update as soon as you can^^!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa!!! I ADORE this chapter!! It's simply awesome!!!
It's hilarious in some parts ( the AA and AManagament is almost too much, buahahah!!!!)
touching in other, Naruto shows more and more of his real personality, Sasuke gets more open and the whole chap is LONG!!!
now I can read it a few times while waiting for the next one, without wanting to throttle somebody out of frustration :)
Don't anyone lay a finger on Naruto except sasuke, of course :) , he's got enough of torture already, right?
Now it's time for bilding trust and self-confidence. I hope sasuke will find some solution to help him out of the sex-slaves world.
Update ASAP!!!!
It's hilarious in some parts ( the AA and AManagament is almost too much, buahahah!!!!)
touching in other, Naruto shows more and more of his real personality, Sasuke gets more open and the whole chap is LONG!!!
now I can read it a few times while waiting for the next one, without wanting to throttle somebody out of frustration :)
Don't anyone lay a finger on Naruto except sasuke, of course :) , he's got enough of torture already, right?
Now it's time for bilding trust and self-confidence. I hope sasuke will find some solution to help him out of the sex-slaves world.
Update ASAP!!!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I forgot to mention one more thing!!
HURRAY for SLUTTY GAARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Ja!
HURRAY for SLUTTY GAARA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ^_^
Ja!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it...I look forward to reading the next chapter, keep up the good work!! :P
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok good story so far, and i don't got many complaints.
but i do have some math figures that are a little off.
at $20.00 a week that's only $140.00.
and only$280.00 for 2 weeks.
man sasuke got riped big time! LOL
but i do have some math figures that are a little off.
at $20.00 a week that's only $140.00.
and only$280.00 for 2 weeks.
man sasuke got riped big time! LOL
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool. Ah shit, I love this story. Don't make Naru-chan return to the street. Sasuke can take good care of him. I don't like the part where Sasuke say he tell that for Hinata (or am I misunderstanding, even if my english is good, I can do mistake in my reading sometimes) cause I like a cold Sasuke, but saying he's doing this for her doesn't make so much sense for me. So, please, continue. Good luck! Ja!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Happiness!! This is soooo good:D I really like the posibitilty of sweetness that is growing
between Sasuke and Naruto and I love the fact that Naruto do have moodswings and IS more angry and doesn't just bawl all the time!!
between Sasuke and Naruto and I love the fact that Naruto do have moodswings and IS more angry and doesn't just bawl all the time!!