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for It's a Hard Knock Life

by Tatemshope

person Yianne_21
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YUp! definitely like this story! please make it a proper story! I'll be watching out for it.
person Kali S.
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaawwwww!!!!! *cries* Poor Naru!!!! He never deserved the lot life dealt him! He may THINK he did, for some odd reason that might be explained in later chapters, but he doesn't! ^_^ Hinata's the sweetest, though. And does Sasuke actually think Naruto'll trust him? Pshaw. Poor thing, I wonder what he'll do when Neji gets there...
person bhodi li
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwww..poor sweet Naruto...he's still a wounded little puppy. I hope you continue the story..i like his alternating wounded puppy and cornered animal attitude..kinda disturbing how he's the one that has given up on hope and Sasuke is the one trying to be nice...its really a cute story.
person MeLaiya
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
alright, alrgiht. Im loving this, please update soon and keep up the good work.
person chi no hana
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ouch. that must gave hurt. i wanna read the updates!
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is Greeat ! I love abused-Naruto (bad me, bad !)
He is sooo cute *giggle*, poor him (<--- try to save her conscience)
And Sasuke who can't control his hormone is so fun ^-^

Please update soon !!! ^-^
person Leasan
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HA!! Awesome! So Naruto still has some of his wild side left! :) YES!
All he does is simply captivating and I hope Sasuke will fall for him instantly, hoplessly and with tons of barely hidden tenderness and affection :)
I love this story, it's got immense potential and your writing is enticing!!
So please continue and update as often as possible!
Oh, and one more thing, could you possibly write longer chapters? My curiousity is killing me!! I want more, MORE! Argh...
Damn over-productive, hyper, zealous reviewers of HP and TNG!!
If you get less ( or less enthusiastic, but that's probably due to the shortness of chapters, there just isn't enought material for some people to fell over hills for it, YET! ) reviews here than there it DOES NOT mean this story is worse or less enjoyable or, morst important, less author-attention-demanding, because comunity of Naruto-lovers will always be smaller than e.g. Harry Potter, so have mercy and don't treat us like less important stepchildren.
I better stop here before I get overly dramatic :)
Anyway, I LOVE it, and gods!! I can't wait to read more!!
person vivacious
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i love the paypaybit.... sexystreetsecrets??? lol i hope you keep this story going!
person vivacious
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i love the paypaybit.... sexystreetsecrets??? lol i hope you keep this story going!
person blisblop
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cough.I never knew Sasuke had it in him.He was gonna buy and f--k Naruto!I hope Naruto isn't gonna be a spazzy screaming Naruto,nobody on the street would survive with a persona like that.Seems like he gets alot of attention,even if it is bad.Cigarette burn under the eye,oh boy thats heavy.That will leave a deep big mark,maybe it wasn't held there for long.I really like the setting,the apartment,Hinata and Sasuke together as best friends is wicked cool.I guess its a danger with this sort of story to keep the good guys believable and not saints of some sort,you have that covered with Sasuke being lusty.I can not say how much I like this guy,Sasuke that is.I am kinda scared of what Naruto may be,you have made Sasuke a rather charming paradox I'm hoping Naruto will be just as personable and not someone Sasuke "loves in spite of".I always find tales like that highly unbeleivable because there are only a few turn offs worde than stupidity.I have high ,high hopes here.Itachi is a gross sick bastard bastard eh?Sighs,a shame but I can handle it as long as this Sasuke is there.For some reason I find him munchy beyond words,perhaps his respect for and love of Hinata is so strong it infers he can be as passionate and loving in other areas.Wow I still can't believe he bought him.You got guts.Rippingly good so far.Oh,bad note,Sakura ,whats with that screaming out like that?You have lowered her IQ?She could have gotten them in trouble with the law for starters,at the very least she made a specticle of them all...jeez Sakura how do you think the boy feels or Sasuke when you scream out information that is none of your business.