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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cliff hanger!!!!!! update supersoon!!!! XD
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic. It isn't something you see too often and you're writing style is very smooth and flows nicely. I look forward to more chapters, the plot is slow moving, which is normal for the beginning of the fic, and my anticipation is building to see what else happens. I do hope you update soon, and next time I promise to leave a longer review. Keep up the excellent work.
~fae
~fae
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story becomes even more interesting by the minute! I definitely would like to see how this fic would go, the plot's amazing and the characters are right in their place! I hope you will continue on writing this sotry until the very end, I'm pretty excited how the next chapter will turn out! Email me once you've updated and I'll e the first one to R&R!
-Elk
-Elk
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the idea. What you have down so far is good material. I like how you have set up the situation and how you are developing that characters.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this plot and I hope you contiune the story.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*crying* THAT was so sad............ i can't stop crying how sad ... oh my god..... poor naruto..... oh well he has sasuke now i hope ... pls continue this ...... is a awesome fanfic i hope this review will make ya update faster so I will know what will happen after that pls pls update keep up the good work and pls update!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story sound great !
Poor Naruto, you make him a prostitute... T-T
Hope that Sasuke will save him soon...
Is Itachi that another person who frighten Naruto ?
Please update soon !!!
Poor Naruto, you make him a prostitute... T-T
Hope that Sasuke will save him soon...
Is Itachi that another person who frighten Naruto ?
Please update soon !!!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, it's me again. I like this story lots, it's plot is promissing. I feel bad fer Naruto, that must be a horrible life to live. Maybe you could somehow have Sasuke save him, ne? Well, in anycase, I'd love to help with the Beta-ing again, it was pretty easy. Did the highlighting help, or should I just edit it then send it back to you? Well, my email addy is up there, so feel free to send me a copy of the next chapter. Laters
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, yes, I like this first chapter. I wonder if the man that Naruto speak about is Itachi, it could be Orochimaru too (I hate him). I like the little prayer at the end. Go Sasuke! Continue! Good luck.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No matter how many times a pairing has been used before, all you need is a change in scenarios and good writing skills in order to get the people to love your fic. And you did just that!! I love how you're going to have both Sasuke AND Hinata to help Naruto. A nice change of pace indeed. UPDATE SOON! UPDATE SOONER! UPDATE NOW!