rate_review Reviews

I think that your story is not a waste of space. I like it so far. You have sparked my curiosity and that is all you really need to get people to start reading. I want to know what Sasuke does with Naruto. Does he tell him what he heard? Does he 'buy' him so he won't have to go back to the pimp? Or maybe he will leave him alone and he goes back to the pimp and then Sasuke and Naruto meet again? There is only one person who can decide that and that is YOU! I think your writing skills are good and with the storyline you are constructing, it will make a good story. Please continue! Don't let my curiosity die out with no conclusions!

i'm liking where this is going, so far. it's nice to see a fic with sasuke not being a complete ass every now and then. hurray for hinata and her sweet influencing ways. and it, also, seems that we might have an appearance from itachi in the near future, if my guess is correct. so i'm definitely looking foward to your next update.

I think the storys pretty good I hope you consider continueing it since it would be a waste of a perfectly good story.

i really really like this story. it has some poignant parts to it. i really feel sorry for poor naruto. he sounds young for an 18 year old though. please continue this story. i hope sasuke makes naruto happy. and the other man is Itachi right?

Oh my god...Ohmygodohmygodohmygod!!!!
You have to continue this, the whole situation and it's possible ramifications are too good to just throw them down the drain!!!
Please update ASAP!!! Especially if you lack ideas for "FaF" at the moment ( I just love your writing too much to just live without it :)
I absolutly LOVE this prologue-like chapter!! And want mooooore :)

Aww, Naruto's prayer was sad. I think this is going to be a very good story, I hope you keep it up. It looks pretty good so far. It is a generic idea, but that's okay. It's still great! And I hope you update fast.

Continue! ^O^ I like it, you could get a nice story development with this so go on and work hard. x3 Give me Naru-chan, I could treat him sooo nice.

I love it!!!!! I hope to see an update really soon!

Naruto's prayer brought a tear to my eye! This one sound fun I can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Poor Naruto...gotta love these ones though. I can't wait for the next chapter! keep up the good work! I'll be looking forward to it!

that i s one of the most depressing things i have heard in my life. it made me cry. but i still wanna read this fic to the end~!