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for It's a Hard Knock Life

by Tatemshope

person Inuzuka
schedule July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading this. My one criticism before I get down to telling you why I enjoyed your fic: you created your own characters -- they were consistent, and interesting, however, I don't think they matched Naruto's cast. But, yeah, from the AU, they had entirely different lives: entirely different people.

First of all, and most of all, it was interesting to read, you definitely kept my attention. Second, I kept getting fuzzy, giddy feelings repeatedly. Third, it was realistic in a lot of ways. Everyone is a bit messed up, I LIKE that. This is an entertaining (even aside from smut) read, keep with it, it's worth it.
person gallatica
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hye!
Finally! Such a long-awaited update..I had to read the previous chapters to remember what the whole story was about! XD

Anyway...I'm glad you've decided to stick with it.

And please, update soon!

P.S.: isnt it Mountain Dew, not Due? XD
person bhodili
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yeah! I love new chapters. I was hoping for a new one for this one. I was very patient and waited and waited and lo and behold here it is. I love how Gaara and Neiji were naughty on Sasuke's bed. I know Sasuke and Naruto were doing things in the closet but I wish I knew what was going on. I love SasuNaru moments. Keep up the Great Work!
person Tati
schedule July 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Happy, very happy... to see you're continuing the story. I really enjoy the way the relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is developing. You've set it up into a believalbe pace, they aren't taking overly long to get together, but also aren't in love immediately. I'm so glad you are going to keep up with the story.
person lo
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A great chapter. I really enjoy reading thi this story, I love how you are handling all acpects of it. Great job.
person Rei
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*squeels*

I thought this fic had been abandoned I hadn't seen anything of
it since the begining or the middle of 8th grade ^-^;;;;

but Im glad I hope you keep it up and going ^-^
person losthimagain
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*glomps* I've missed you! ^^ Yay you're back! ^^ Thank you so much! Please update again soon! YAY! And I take it you're not a big Itachi fan....
person Mei-Chan
schedule July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMFG! I really love your stories! I especially like the way you portray Neji and Gaara. Their my two favorite characters, and now I think I lover them even more because of the story. I love all te outfits you have Gaara wear, too. Like the cowboy chaps, this story makes me laugh, alot. Naruto's character is really good also, it made me want to cry when the tape thing was explained. If it wouldn't be too much trouble, earlier in the sotry, in one of your updates, it said that if we requested, that you'd email us when you came out with a new chapter. It would help if you did, and thanks a bunch! My email is Sorandpyro1@aol.com. Thanks again, and I really do love your story, Mei-Chan.
person anymonus
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
PLZ PLZ PLZ uipdate I love the story and Im waiting for the next chappie!
person sinsoftime
schedule February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!!!!!! Cute!!! MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please? Pretty please? With Ramen on top?