rate_review Reviews

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH! good stuff!! you know how to keep it going. well developed, I am very interested in how this is going to continue. ^-^

I have to be honest and say that I came into this really skeptical b/c I've read other fics where Naruto is a prostitute (and I just don't like the idea, haha), but SO MANY people recommended your fic that, of course, there had to be a reason for that. And boy was I right. Your story is REALLY captivating. I adore Naruto's character. Honestly, I sort of read this thinking of it as a completely original story with original characters, just familiar names. I do this because your characterization of each person, while maintaining some core attributes, doesn't really strike me as IC. But this is FINE b/c, like I said, I just read it thinking they're original characters (which, b/c this is AU, they could be) and I LOVE each character. Sasuke is wonderful and I loved that you made Hinata his best friend. Their dynamic really works here. And I loved that you opened up the story immediately with Sasuke taking Naruto out of the street life so we don't have to read and angst over Sasuke letting Naruto back out onto the street, just angst over memories, haha, but be reassured that Sasuke won't let Naruto go so easily. He isn't the complete prick he was in other fics like this. He actually CARES. I'm really glad you did that ^___^ Gaara is damn hilarious and so is Kakashi. This Itachi bit is also very foreshadowy, haha, and I look forward to seeing that played out.

This is the first fic in a long time where I actually sat and read each chapter WORD FOR WORD. I tend to grow bored with fics and then just start skimming but this one kept me riveted ^__^ Props to you for that. And now I have to do the cliche review thing and beg for an update, haha. ^__^ Please update soon, or as soon as you can. But don't push yourself either. ^^ Good things are always worth waiting for.

I was wondering where sakura is. Yesterday i was like...something is messing and then its like Sakura! Then its like..how in the world is sakura going to fit? I mean unless you change alot of things about her i guess she could fit but i wasnt sure cause like..sakura likes sasuke...naruto likes sakura...sasuke likes no one, in da manga. but here its like...sasuke likes naruto...naruto isnt as op.toe.mis.tic as he was...sakura likes..who? Lol. i was so lost. Rock lee! Oh oh i see. yeah yeah i get it.

gosh i thought i'd get a headache thinking about this. lol

-- whats weird is that im really reading this...i really dun like itachi being the crazy person in the things i read...but i make an exception. Cause gaara and neji are together..so i have too.

<3 <3 <3 muh!

bibi

new reader...
you mad me cry, well not at the end of this chapter but in the beginning.
pooooor Naruto...and Sasuke, I hope in the end they will be happy togeter and that the sons of bitches who hurt them will in the end suffer a lot.
usually I do not read rape, hooker, sad strories, but this one I could not stop reading...ah so say (the story, not how it is written)

please do update soon, I saved the link...

I can't wait for the next chapter. I just love to read the new chapters, you are doing a great job. Its so full of angst and fluff and seriousness, it is a good mix. Keep up the good work.

great job like always i love this story so much its so kool and i cant wait for the next chapter

...wow... you're a REALLY good writer, you know that? this fic is... gah, I can't even describe it! please don't abandon it! I love your writing style, you've obviously given this fic a lot of thought. the way you describe everything is absolutely awesome! love the way you're "humanizing" sasuke (and neji, and gaara...). maybe a bit much OOC for my taste, especially on naruto, but hey! it's your fic... anyways, keep doing whatever it is you're doing, your fic rocks!

First of all, I enjoy the story quite a lot, and I would feel desolate if it were to end so soon. That being said, I think your writing style is quite crisp and clean, and your presentation is amazing. Your characterizations, while not cannon (and I wouldn't expect them to be, so thank you for that.), feel very human, and you have done a very good job at making them believable. Please keep up the excellent work, don't forget the smut, and as always, best wishes.

Kuronue

O.M.F.G.... YOU ARE AMASING!!!! I almsot cried when tehy got in a fight but i laughed and squealed so freakin much!!! gaaah!!! I love when sasuke called kakashi.. was he making love to someone? IRUKA?! omfg.. *spazz* that was such a great chapter, make sure you update soon!! I cant stand when chapters endXOO!!! gaah you make there love sences so sexy congrats <3 :3 I cant make htem that good.. but you make them steamy!!! lol update soon hun!! *clings*

LOL! That was a great ending to the chapter! I busted up laughing, and considering how late it is, I really should try to be quieter...