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*FALLS OVER LAUGHING* OOOH MY GOD That last part totally killed me! I love you! I love this story! It's so great! Please continue!

^_^
nice~

I looooooooooove it
keep it up Im glad you updated it was good!

OH MY GOD THAT WAS SOO FUNNY!!!! i love this story dearly and that last bit was way too funny to be legal...you have got to continue this. it's awesome

Neji/Gaa all the way, Gaara is /such/ an uke

Hee hee, loved the ending. ;-) too funny, and who was it that answered Kakashi's phone.

I haven't reviewed this at all yet, so my comments pertain to the entire fic.

WOW this is definitely one of the best SasuNaru fics I've ever read,
and (excluding the work of Veronica P.) one of the best fics I've read, period.

The characters are written extremely well, and you were able to create a
/complete/ AU with different situations and different life events while still
maintaining the basic structure of their personalities. That takes true talent!
You've fought against the general clichés that authors tend to use for seme and
uke, which tend to make me hate the uke. Also, I hate when seme and uke are
so defined that it's painfully obvious. (Except in cases like Yuki and Shiuchi, obviously)
But I LOVE both Naruto and Sasuke in this fic! Awesome work!

The developing relationship between Sasuke and Naruto is absolutely
adorable, and the fic holds a depressing, heart wrenching element
in which you /don't/ have to be a slasher to be affected by.

My absolute favorite scene was the one in the car where Naruto asks
Sasuke to kiss him. When Naruto said "You want me to kiss you?" with
such disbelief, I was seriously died. It was so perfect.

There are SO many humorous elements, I was literally laughing out
loud with the "There's porn on the internet?" comment, and when
Hinata walks in on them. You combine the perfect amount of humor
(and lemons) so the fic doesn't get too depressing.

Speaking of lemons, YAY FOR SASUKE AND NARUTO HAVING SEX!
Although the Sasuke/Naruto scene could have been a little longer...

Any chance of some Kakashi/Iruka scenes or even implications? They're
such a popular pairing.

Thank you for the awesome work and please keep it up! Also,
you seem to update SO much faster than many other writers, and
I speak for all of us when I say: WE APPRECIATE IT. Please keep updating!

Boys forever!

LOL that ending was great...."we're not gonna get ca-" !!!
as for the next chapter...I say Gaara/Neji =D they're both pretty dominant, but...meh =)
Love your story lots, and update quickly!! ~^^~

Yaaa! you updated, I am glad. This is a great story btw and a great chapter. I vote for Gaara/Neiji cause I love Gaara/anybody. I hope you have something really nasty planned for Itachi too.

YES! this really made my day. :) the chapter was great and I'm glad that Sasuke finally told Naruto about his brother. um... but he still hasn't told him about letting all the other guys see that video @.@ anyways~ i can't wait to see some action between gaara and neji.

if i had to pick? i'd say neji/gaara.

thanks for another great chapter, i'll be looking forward to your next update.