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typical Sasuke, he's such a hardarse.

MORE PLEEEEEZE!

this was very poignant and slightly sad. i feel that, if sasuke hadn't (SPOILER! for anyone who doesn't know too much about naruto) betrayed konoha and went to orochimaru (and also if naruto and sasuke actually had a relationship) this is what it would be like for them. sasuke would still act like an asshole, pretending like he doesn't care, shying away from emotions that would only tie him down and make him weak. and naruto would always be there, trying his best to help sasuke, willing to do anything for him. this story of yours, i think, showed a very realistic slant on their relationship. it's not a bed of roses (sorry for the cliched saying), but with those two, theirs will always be a struggle. but sasuke's smile hinted that maybe, just maybe, it may not always be so bad. a continuation of this would be great, but as is, this is an awesome one-shot.

*sniffs* It's so sad, but I love it! I hope Naruto breaks Sasuke's nose and ends it with him! *Sniffs* That would be hard to explain to Kakashi as well... Sasuke didn't even say anything and Naruto's bustin' his nose in!! LOL

Will you do a sequal to this? I would love to read a follow-up. Anyway, it was simple and perfect in my opinion. You showed their emotions easy. It's on my favourite list.

Keep up the good work.

Simple and perfect. It shows everything that defines them with a simple none gesture. Beautiful.

That's a very interesting one-shot. It wouldn't hurt to have a sequel, but then, it's strong enough to stand on it's own. All in all, a good fic. Keep up the great writing. Ja!

Aww!...thats so sad! ; _ ; ...cute, but sad! I really liked it. You should write more! o^-^o

I like how you covered the same part of the story from both POVs. Sasuke can sure be a hateful little bastard, hey?

it's not made out to be a oneshot. it's the making of a good multi-chap. please consider continuing this, cause it's good. i can just picture what the story would be like, and i swear it's gonna kick ass. please, please think about it.