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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked the two points of view you did- it added a nice effect to the story. I think this would make a good 3 part story... though its enjoyable as a oneshot as well. Perhaps add a bit more scene information- well done on the character detail.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I honestly can't decide if that was really, really sweet, or really, really sad. It makes me want to write SasuNaru angst, though. Good job, Sasuke was perfectly in character, as was Naruto.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! I like this! It's sweet! A cute one shot. (^-^)
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
kyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!! *squeeeeeeee!!!!!* omg.....wow.......so good.......i shalt weep. wow....*HUG* no words, m'dear. i wish i could write like that...
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was really sad...Maybe it's cuz I read so much SasuNaru fluff... Anyway, it was very good! Although a little sad... I always like it when Sasuke forgets about his brother and embraces Naruto's love... but that's just me... GREAT JOB!
Much Love
~koolanimefreek
Much Love
~koolanimefreek
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the last paragraph. It is so powerful.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story here... i know sasuke likes naruto but wouldnt admit it...
get sasuke jealous or something, or make him regret once naruto
is gone from his life!!! SO continue the story !!
get sasuke jealous or something, or make him regret once naruto
is gone from his life!!! SO continue the story !!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! This was so touching...It was just wonderful the way you showed both of their views. Th ending was perfect, as well...Right now, I'm just screaming "sequel" in my mind...D':
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! *is bawling her eyes out* Ok, blame it on PMS or being overly emotional or SOMETHING, but I can't help it!!! That was sooooooo sad... and sweet...... and........... *bursts into tears again* ^^;; Very well written -- I loved your characterizations -- and definetly deserving of a follow-up, lol. Keep up the good work!!!