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Wow! I really like this story! However, I'm slightly confused...the first part when they were fighting and Temari fell off the cliff was that like a previous event and then it fast forward to present day? Just wanted to make sure =) Very good writing, I can't wait to read more....and yes, I like the fact that Gaara and Temari aren't blood related *shudders* not cool to me. Keep up the good work.

OH.MY.GAWD. This is too awesome to be true! You have such a wonderful writing style and everything you describe starts to show up before my own eyes like a movie...You simply rock *_* Please continue! I can´t wait to read more!

YOSH! You updated at last! ^__^ *squees* Gaara is so broody and adorable in this fic! I love the whole "interrogation" thing he had going with Temari, and I think it's interesting how you handled her character in that situation. Pretty IC, I think. ^o^ You have Gaara's character down PAT. That alone is the most note-worthy thing about this chappy, so kudos! I had a little inner joygasm at the whole "rehydration" thing, and I can't wait for you to update this. Come on, it's too promising to abandon, right? ^_~

Good luck!

CONTINUE! Ah, I LOVE Gaara/Temari and your writing style just makes me love it even more. I noticed a few grammar mistakes, but they weren't big so I don't even remember what they were. *sweatdrops* Please update soon!

chapter 2 is nicely done, plot is quite interesting. haha, is "rehydrated" equal to a kiss?.... its cute. Gaara is quite in character in your story, both in speech and actions.

A really nice story! PLease update soon!

Wow, nice. I like the plot, the way 'tis not cliched. I like the "I rehydrated you" line, and the way the characters are portrayed. Not OOC, which is nice. Glad there are people out there, writing sandcest. (There are very few and far between) Hope you do continue.

WOOT I LUVS IT

very nice. Finally, a Temari x Gaara story. a very good read. Please update! ^^ Its creatuve that you made Gaara and Temari not blood-related. but even if they are real siblings, I will still like this pairing.

YOSH! Finally, another promising GaaTema fic! ^__^ Aside from a couple of grammatical errors, this looks to be quite promising. I love the setup so far, and your characterization of Gaara is...dead-on awesome! ^o^ I'm really feeling anxious for Temari at this point...O_o I really want to know what happens next! And it's totally up to you whether you want to continue adding chapters or start another fic, but I would LOVE to see you continue this!

People tend to give up halfway through and that's a real let-down, so I'm hoping you'll update this! Good luck!