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for Epilogue: At Home

by starapple

person moi
schedule August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ahhh... my heart just broke

*cries*
person Black Ice
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! So sad! :sobs: I cried when I read this. Poor Gaara. Poor Naruto. Poor everything. I really liked this piece though; god, so sad!
person Alisha
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear good you weren't kidding in anyway that readers would hate this....
I reveiwed the first fic on ff.net....saying poor Gaara....oooh how I didn't know then.....
Wow that's horrible :'(:'(:'(:'(:'(^:'(
It must....must have been done I can see that in this fiction, and yet....the sadness will not leave....loved him to the end...accepted his fate lovingly...:'(:'(:'(^:'(
......Owww that hurt....sooo painful...you did a spectacularly cruel job and getting emotions and pain across to the reader....I cried...oooh how sad I am now....
I really enjoy this chapter even if you did kill the love....oh Gaara...poor Gaara...
Good job though..:'(:'(
~alisha
person ayonoi
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for the epilogue. It is very fitting, I personally didn't think that Gaara was going to have a happy ending, he was already losing his hold on the demon and Naruto was running away from his real feelings. It would have been unfair for both. And at the end, who else to give peace to Gaara but Naruto. Death by the person you love, you can't ask for anything better.

Both of them understood what was happening.

Excellent end to a very thoughtful and interest story.
person MultifacetedTune
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very touching....... almost unbearably sad, but touching. *is trying not to cry* ^^ Very well written, and a realistic "end" to your fic. Thanks again, and keep up the good work!!!
person sorviball
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH!!!! This was not what I expected it all. I think I have to go running around my room screaming insanely before I calm down...I'm completely speechless. I was aware, due to your warning, that this was not going to be a happy chapter, and thus proceeded cautiously. BUT STILL!!! Wow, if I were Naruto, I wouldn't have been able to do it. I don't question your choices in how it all turned out, because I felt that this last epilogue was very fitting with the tone of the rest of the story. It was just so heartbreaking that Gaara doesn't find a sense of completion and he dies never really knowing what it was to be loved. But I guess in the sadness lies the true beauty of your story. Once again, your writing amazes me. It was just as poetic as the rest of The Little Things. If you don't recognize the name, I reviewed as Mira before. I'm sorry, I think I'm still in shock. And after rereading the last chapter of The Little Things, I was confused as to how the fire started. Was it Naruto? I guess it doesn't really matter. Thank your for sharing such a wonderful story with us. You are an amazing writer, so please keep it up.
person Just_me
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, I wanna scream at you, curse you, do everything that comes with flames and the fact that you made me cry... but I can't.... you gave warnings and told that no one was going to like it...
I was really curious about Gaara and for some strange reason I'm happy it went this way. No more pain for such an already tormented soul...
Well, I'm going to fight down the urge to strangle you... (I dun like crying) ^^;;;

ja ne ^^V