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first chapter was good, very poinient. I like how you took something if find to be a little cliche (cutting) and made if very engaging and enjoyable to read. I really like this story. Okay, ch 2...you had me so terrified that i was almost wetting myself. kakashi is a very good actor! holy hell. I couldn't believe how far you went with that. BRAVO!!! Most excellent stuff. i have to keep reading now or my head will explode.
Cheers
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wonderful! wonderful! Hope you will continue toupdate with more chapters soon! Love this story. Super great!
sincerely,
Jazzy

really good love kakashi just randomly popping in on iruka, but there has been inconsistancy in the piece like if he's been cutting throughout shouldnt he still be doing it, there was no mention of new injuries or cuts for kakashi to notice i just thought about that while i was reading. it really is a good piece and i hope you continue it so i can read more. keep up the good work and update soon.

Cute and funny... waaai! There is the slight cheese factor, but cheese is tasty. YUP. Updates would be absolutely adored and cherished like little cheese babies.

And now that I have thoroughly traumatized you for life, adieu!

OOOOoO Stop leaving us/me in suspense...Pretty pleace Update

I wasn't sure I was going to like this, since I hate a depressed Iruka. But since there's a lack of ficcage on this pairing I gave it a try. I'm glad I did. I'm quite enjoying it and hope that the long period since the last chapter doesn't mean you've quit. Hope to see an update soon.

I really like it, it's pretty hard to find a nice KakaIru fic you know? but this one is really good and funny. keep it up

add more!!!!!!!
this is really good

Excilent story I love it update soon please