rate_review Reviews

This story is great, and don't worry about not having a sex scene in every chapter. It took me about.....14 chapters before the boys (Sasu and Naru) got laid in my story. And those with just sex become boring after a while. You have a very nice writing style, with virtually no mistakes. I stay very entertained throughout all your chapters. Poor Iruka, he's so oblivious. Everybody knows that boys pick on the girls they like. :P
Keep up the good work, and though you can definitely listen and incorporate reviewer suggestions, remember that it's your story and it should go the way you want it to go, whether we like it or not.
My only complaint is that you make the chapters longer....just because I want to read more. ^_^
And you're right; you never realize how much reviews mean to an author until you become one. They keep you going.
I can't wait to read more!

MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

(please)

I love it!!!!!!
This is such an awesome story!!!!!
You have to write more!!!!

really nice fic! I love how Kakashi acts like a schoolboy with his first crush, and since Iruka's situation is rather delicate I hope you won't rush things between them!
as for the recs you must absolutely read: "the kakashi mission", "blind", "outclassed" on ff.net, then "hunter's moon" and "the perfect trap" (you can only find them at the kakairu community -months of June and July); and last but not least read anything wrote by Isolde1 and Meleth78 (ff.net). hope you'll like all of them as much as I do
I really like your style and story so I hope you'll write more soon!

Bwa-! Drunk Iruka...how DOES Kakashi hide the bottles?
Say yes Iruka! Say yes! Another great chapter.
it was a little convoluted but it turned out really well.
=^_^=

This chapter was just as good as the others and I can't wait to see what you'll come up with next! Please keep going and update whenever you can. I know what it's like not to have a chance to read/ write/ review anymore - I'm in Law School.

Ne! Kakashi is so cool! You show Iruka that you can save him! Anyway I loved it so update, will ya? Laterz!

Oh my gosh!! This is soo good! At first I thought "Kakashi´s a jerk" but then, you started to change him an show different aspects of him. Very good! And Iruka, who would think of him this way? This inner pain and everything... I really enjoyed your story and I´m anxious to read more and more!
Né, sorry for my English, It´s not my first language.
mata ato de né!

Oh my gosh!! This is soo good! At first I thought "Kakashi´s a jerk" but then, you started to change him an show different aspects of him. Very good! And Iruka, who would think of him this way? This inner pain and everything... I really enjoyed your story and I´m anxious to read more and more!
Né, sorry for my English, It´s not my first language.
mata ato de né!

Loved the way that you ended this chapter. I just hope that Iruke remembers this conversation come morning. Iruka is such a sweet man and I do hope that Kakashi is able to bring him the happiness that they both deserve. An enjoyable read!