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for Trapped Dolphin

by somnambulistdreams

person Quichi
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am SO confused.... @_@
person Bakura
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kakashi won't ever do that to Iruka poo ;;

oh, and I'm at 51 chap. please, no spoilers, ot at least a fair warning :X~

and. where's the kakairu whan Kakashi tries to kill him? ;;
person Raiko
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YOU EVIL TEASE!!!
Want to know what happens!! Go go chapter 3!
Kakashi looked pretty convincing! It was amazing.
And poor Iruka...first he's slashing himself, then Kakashi plays tricks on him...well, It'll be a miracle if a lemon actually occurs in your fic!!=^_^=
Keep on going!! I love your fic!
See ya
Yurikai Kurosaki
person eyes0nme19
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..its getting really interesting...looking forward to the next chapter!!
person Komikitty
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"it's about time"?!?! WTF?!
Is Tsunade in on this to?
Or did did she know about Kakashi?
Or..or...oh no!
Is that Kakashi Disguised as Tsunade Baa-chan?!
Iruka's not gonna DIE is he?
Kakashi's....not....REALLY evil...Is he?
Please update soon! I need to know!
=^_^=
person mini-kero
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woaw!!! this is soooooooo cool *___* I don't quite understand but it's good, I was crying each time Iruka was thinking about his life, this is so sad :( but such a nice fic, please continue!!!! °°KisSeS°°
person eyes0nme19
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting...keep it up!
person Quichi
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh. Intriguing start. Poor Iruka! Kakashi will fix him, right?
person Komikitty
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O Wow...Poor Iruka Sensei...Won't he find out that that wasn't really Naruto?
Please update soon, It looks like it's gonna be a really cool story!
=^_^=
person Yit-Ha
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting start. I'm putting this story on my favs list, so pleas update frequently. And try to lay off some of the Iruka-torture.