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by MLL

person UchihaXBloodXBoils
schedule September 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was AMAZING! Could have done with a Lemon, but even without, it was still awsome. Great job.. Very angsty, made me cry, lol.
person Rosebud
schedule June 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow...
Just OMG...
I was trying my hardest not to cry when I was reading this.
You wrote a beautiful story! And I LOVED the ending! ^^
person jax
schedule September 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it! keep up the good weork!
person Mochi~
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lady Red, miss. You must be the queen of NaruSasuNaru AU one-shots.
person lock
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH GOD! your goddamn good in one shot! i really like your one-shot stories, you know i preferred chaptered stories but when i finished reading your story, i think i change my mind! i'll wait for your next story, til next time! (your one of my favorite authors!)
person tenshi213
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, this fic was really good for a one shot... probably because it was, like you said, a long one shot.
ahaha... I LOVE sasunarupairings, although I do feel a bit bad for Neji
^ ^"
write some more please~
doumo!
person Sukara
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You made me cry!! xD Lol. Great story, next time don't make it so sad.....or a death fic!! xD
person sephykoi
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_o;

Ugh... That was brilliantly done, ... but...

So fucking painful.

*is a NejixNaruto fan*

;~;

*is saddened* My poor boy!! *glomps the Hyuuga*
person illumi39
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! :D very nice -- a roll of angst, drama, romance, fluff and smut!!! ^____^ I LOVE THIS!!! Even though I don't really like NejiNaru, you wrote it in a way that made me not thoroughly turn the chance of Naruto and Neji being together... Though I'm still a hardcore SasuNaru fan at heart *grins* I think you portrayed Sasuke nicely -- much like the canon Sasuke, with all his moodiness, denial, silence, broodiness and secrecy [plus him running away] -- and Naruto as well, with all his indecisions and security. I find it very true-to-life!!! *happiness* Very nicely done and you need more reviews!! This is such a nice SasuNaru fanfic!!! :D Write MORE!!! Especially of this pairing that I SO love!!! XD

Looking forward to seeing more lovely SasuNaru fanfics from you, illumi39 *heart*
person yay!
schedule September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice!! really, REALLY nice!!! :D i LOVE it!! Keep writing more beautiful SasuNaru fanfics/one-shots!! Load it with romance just like this!!! Angst and happy endings!!! ^___^