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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT JOB!!! Magnificent mixing of fluff, angst, drama and romance! Write more fics like this!!!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you did wonderfully. And you did have both in your story. Do you plan to keep this a one-shot? I think it will stand better as a one-shot, btw. Truly great writing. Am looking forward to more of your work. Ja!
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I personally wouldn't sleep with a guy who tells me that he hates me but his body betrays him. I'd kinda feel like a whore or soemthing. And I don't think that a doctor would excite a patient who just came out of surgery by having heavy make out sessions with them. But taht could just be me. Otherwise, it was pretty good.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW... it made me cry in couple parts
it's really good... but at the end part... i keep wondering... what happen to the nurses and neji while they were making out??? i was kind of unconsicously waiting for a 'dry cough' some time in between their kiss.. haha
it's really good... but at the end part... i keep wondering... what happen to the nurses and neji while they were making out??? i was kind of unconsicously waiting for a 'dry cough' some time in between their kiss.. haha
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. whoa. a LONG oneshot!!! :) *gleeful laughter*
^_______^ I like the story!!! ^___^ it's usually Sasuke being the rich one--but now--you made a different story!!! well, I feel sorry for Neji since he's one of my favorites in Naruto (next to Sasuke, Naruto, Kakashi and Itachi XD) but hey~! I've always ALWAYS always been a fan of Sasuke x Naruto!!!
Good job!!! =)
Keep the romantic [no death fics T__T] stories going!!! *hugzzzz*
SasuNaru rules!!! ^_________^
>> Seto's Darkness <<
^_______^ I like the story!!! ^___^ it's usually Sasuke being the rich one--but now--you made a different story!!! well, I feel sorry for Neji since he's one of my favorites in Naruto (next to Sasuke, Naruto, Kakashi and Itachi XD) but hey~! I've always ALWAYS always been a fan of Sasuke x Naruto!!!
Good job!!! =)
Keep the romantic [no death fics T__T] stories going!!! *hugzzzz*
SasuNaru rules!!! ^_________^
>> Seto's Darkness <<
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"I hate you, but my body betrays me"
~! Yay!!! hehehe xD i wuv that line ^___^
nice writing style -- especially the HOT scene at the recovery room *applauds gleefully like the SasuNaru fangirl she is* molest Sasuke!!! whoop!!!!!!!! ^___________________^
*see how wide my smile is?*
want to see more SasuNaru from your great ideas and writing style :)
Keep up the good work!!!
~! Yay!!! hehehe xD i wuv that line ^___^
nice writing style -- especially the HOT scene at the recovery room *applauds gleefully like the SasuNaru fangirl she is* molest Sasuke!!! whoop!!!!!!!! ^___________________^
*see how wide my smile is?*
want to see more SasuNaru from your great ideas and writing style :)
Keep up the good work!!!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OHHHH... nevermind my question.. i skipped a sentence =p sorry bout that. i tend to do it when i get into a story.. hahaa
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story i love it! keep up the good work
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, what the heck. I read all of it at once and I love your writing style. This is one damn heck of a story and one damn long one-shot in my opinion. You could always write more of this one, but I feel that this is enough. I would like to see more of you, so keep up the good work.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was so emotional! Poor, poor, Neji, I just want to make it all better for him!