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August 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Hey good story. Did you think about making a second chap to show how shika responds to the rape, how everyone else in the village reacts, them helping him, or something to that?
Keep up the good work :)
Keep up the good work :)
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was incredible!! XD I LIVE for anything Orochimaru-sama based and you nailed it my friend! I've had OroShika fics running through my head for ages but have never done anything with them. I'm adding this to my fave's! q_p
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay for bizarre ass pairings and late-night, drug-fogged writing sprees! I like this story, esp the way you explain the mad attachment of Orochimaru's subordinates -- for such a creepy old lech, he has quite a sexy young fan club. Kinda makes you wonder. Well, now we know. ^.^
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* I came to check up on the stories that I read and saw this. ^^ I didn't know you even had an account here...*goes off to read what else you've written*
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, very well done. I like odd pairings, especially good written ones that have a plausible story behind it. I never would have thought of an Orochimaru x Shikamaru pairing, but I really liked it!! Great work!!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story - it's on offbeat pairing which you've written very well. Halfway through I was wondering "Oh no, is Shika going to want to join Orochimaru too?", but then there was the revulsion at the end, and that seemed like a good mix of emotions. I'm glad you wrote it!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I actually read this story simply because Shikamaru is my absolute favorite character and I saw that it was one of the few stories written about him (though there seem to be more lately), but I was pleasantly surprised. Very well-written, and for such an odd pairing, you actually made it plausible. Great work.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool.Cool.Coooool.I think after a while Sasuke would grow bored of being in thrall to an illusion.I am sure Oro knows lots of tricks.Very IC(well except fpr the rape,... as far as we know) The feeling of the thing was very in with the manga.Well done old Bean!