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for Dreams

by xkesshoux

person Veja24
schedule April 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First of all, Sasuke wouldn't kill Itachi on his sleep because it's not the avenger's way. The difference between avenger and murderer is that avenger fights with honour, while killer has no principals.

Second, you could have made them having sex instead of having a repeat of masturbation. Just an opinion.
schedule September 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is the way that Uchihacest should be written. :)
person blueinferno
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww that was so figging good! *cries* you should do a sequel!! with Itachi fucking his brother! :P lmao
person blisblop
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How the heck did I miss this!Outrage.Beautiful,rather realistic,so sad.Sasuke thought it was a dream?He has dreams...what cause them/is causing them besides the fact he really loves/thinks his bro is attractive?You are gonna do this again aren't you?It has a personal tone the others don't.I like that they call out to each other.Shivers.Yeah.Cough.So..it would be a waste if you didn't do this again,yup,yup,yup!
person oOKeairaOo
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was really great. I was looking for some ItaSasu, and that was perfect. A little OOC, but that made it even better, I think. By the way, was it a dream or wasn't it? I thought maybe it wasn't, because Itachi layed Sasuke down and all after Sasuke was unconscious, but then Sasuke woke up and thought it was a dream. Wouldn't he know if it wasn't? He should still be... well, naked... but then again, maybe I've missed some deeper meaning.

Anyway, EXCELLENT story. I hope to see more of this pairing from you, as it's my favorite, and you seem to do a very good job of writing it.
person Oboro
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, that was excellent! I do like me some well written Uchihacest!! I thought it was very well done, and not that out of character, considering other fics I've read of the pairing. It was plausible, and the whole dream thing along with it made it very bittersweet. I also like the line about how fighting Sasuke is like kicking puppies.... that cracked me up, because it's true in a way, at least for Itachi. Another great fic; keep it up!!