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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What happens next and when will it be out!
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! Really looking forward to the next chapter.. (There will be one, right?) Hinata and Gaara pairing way cute in this story. And Hinata and Sasuke becoming friends because neither one wants to marry the other, interesting! I like your other work too. Awesome stuff. :) It definitely keeps me from my studies! (whether that be good or bad, depends on how you look at it. ha ha)
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice I didn't think I would like this b/c I'm used to having Hinata being really strong. Well in fanfiction but now in chappie 4 she is and I love it. I was freaked out about the notion of her being blind when in reality she can see all but it worked out find I hope you update real soon as well as Below Zero. Oh and make more Gaara and Hinata fics there becoming...well they are my favorite Het couple yaoi is still my fav lol. well update soon
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I'm so glad Sasuke's in it now. :D Hope to get some SasuNaru eventually, or I wouldn't mind SasuNeji. ;) I need to know what happens next! Please write more soon!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man I knew that Sasuke kid was gay. Good chapter, one of what I hope will be many good chapters. Perhaps when Hinata makes her escape she will consider putting the mansion to the torch.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it! I want to read more, but if you decide to leave it there, then thats okay too. I think you did a really good job. I honestly feel that Hinata is the only girl that suits Gaara. Good job, and keep up the good work.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cha,Hinata marries Sasuke and then they proceed to live with Gaara and Naruto who can then have the lives they want.Opps we need Naruto in on this now...I like The characters alot.They are very alive.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lemons and limes are welcome every chapter as far as I am concerned.its not like you get bored with it once you start,you can and do create tention each time and that seems to be what people miss with le/li, the tention but tention turns to absurd teasing and that gets old fast.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude that was great! I love this chapter,I love the way you bought Sasuke into the story... Naruto too ohh I wanna know more, please update soon okie dokie!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hold off on the lemon. More chapters good, lime good, lemon not yet.