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for Desert Lion

by Trollmia

person ^^
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING DEAR!!
keep on writing!!
person blisblop
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Womens blue balls show up as very,very swollen labia's and clit.It is very sensitive but touch it and it hurts,kinda over stimulated without relief.
person Anon
schedule September 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWsome! the stories you do with this pair are always sooo good. you sure know how to bring out a sweet side in garra
person blisblop
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Touching,Tsundae is a rather advanced thinker,hope she provides birth control along with permission.
person Nasis
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story! I can't wait to see what comes next!
person BTerran
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's looking good. I've never read a Hinata/Gaara fic before but it actually seems to work out pretty nicely.
person tatemshope
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I really really like this. I wasn't sure that I would, but I can't wait to read more. I was an intern at the State School for the Blind for 3 years; I lived there, worked there, ate there... the whole deal. So if you ever need a Beta for this I would love to help out! It's amazing! Good job!
person eyes0nme19
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute and interesting...keep it up!!
person Roushutsu
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting idea, especially Hinata being blind. I predict good things in the future for this fic, so keep it up!
person Roushutsu
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaw...Gaara can be a sweetie when he tries. ^_^