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wahh, i cant wait for the 2 sesssions you said ^^ also also could you plz email me when you update dis story? my address is deannathx@comcast.net

hey! this story is amazing and i love the fact that it's set when they're still genin's, it's one of the very few stories like that. But what I wanted to know was whether you are continuing this or not? I really hope you are as i love your characterisations... please do!

Seeing how unstructured and confusing the story gets at times, why don't you take a little break and go over your chapters once more (I really loved the beginning!), write down the rough storyline, try to fill some minor plot-holes etc.? I really like your story, so please don't rush your future chapters! Oh, and by the way: Although the nightmare was quite dramatic, I was cracking up when Naruto got strangled by dream-Sasuke -> 'bakemono' means monster/ghost, "bakemoro' has no meaning whatsoever. ^_^
Keep going!

O. M. G........(- -);;;;;;;;

i just realised something........i haven't planned out when sasuke finds out about the fox. *slaps forehead against brick wall*

thanks vashta for reminding me. i knew there was something wrong but just couldn't put my finger on it. but don't worry. i'll have sasuke find out in one way or form.

and thanks Kasumi for reviewing ^_^ i liked your fic and am awaiting what happens.

(and, as everyone else thats reading this finds out, the author has just realised that you can reply back to your reviewers here. so, not only is the author blind and forgetful but also stupid beyond comparison.)

Ok, about being to young for sex, well maybe normally, but they are expected to go out and risk death for the sake of the mission, so they should live while they can, hmm? If they can die for the village they can enjoy love and life while they can. Now, more please, when does Sasu find out about the fox?

Hey love your story!! Please continue it!! Update soon and just re-read it to know what you wrote. It's actually interesting and kawaii!! ANyway keep up a good work!!

ok, you reviewed my story (Sasuke's Reality) so I'll review yours....CUTE!!!! lol, honestly i think thats the only way i can describe it.

poor Naru-chan. *goes to kill the random pottery seller* please upd8 soon i wish to find out what appens to my fav. couple.

About the coment that Kakashi said with the gold fishes in the sea... Who wants to date a fish?