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for The Unlikely Sleepover

by Serenia

person Makeila
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
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omg, that was so....>.<
my fave male characters "getting it on"
*giggles like a school girl* [i do NOT do this often]
lol, i loved it! ^_^
[schmexy *coughs* picture]
person toir
schedule September 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, that was cute. And hot. *wipes up drool from keyboard*
person Katbites
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
And after sitting back in her chair, Katbites smiled at the computer screen, a long, well-deserved 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!' escaping her. Then she died of happy two minutes later, when she ran out of breath.
person MewXisXback
schedule August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was just...amazing! Pany-wetting amazing! XP
person dawn
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AWSOME!! LOVED IT :)
person Havoc Tellenoi
schedule July 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That had to be the cutest story i've ever read about the Neji/Gaara mix. Adding Shikamaru was just a yummy bonus. I hope that it continues and becomes a much longer story.
person shikamaru
schedule June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hehe....... ya that was a fun sleepover and man did gaara ever have a hangover the next morning me and neji thought it would be funny to have naruto give gaara a special wake up call ( a big bucket of freezeing cold water) man i never saw sand pants jump so high in my life and get this he streaked all the way through konoha to the hot springs naruto still can't keep a str8 face when gaara comes to town
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.o Wow.....that was good. :D
person dimonyo-anghel
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yay! i love this!! poor neji and gaara in the beginning though! and whoo hoo shika is a TRUE genius...............*wink wink*
person cyzay
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That. Was. Hot.
Amazingly good, well written, and great characterization. love the choices of charaters also - they happen to be 3 of my favorite characters. it was that good to where it doenst even matter that none of the three are ever likely to be friends like that. Great discriptions - it was really easy to follow, visualize, and get into.