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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
XD I enjoyed this, it made me chuckle quite a bit. Good job
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October 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet shit man. I have a challenge 4 u, can u do 1 of KakashixIrukaxGai, or 1 of just Gai and Lee Plz and thank u
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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww...definitely the hottest threesome ever! write more!!!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cute and quite well written. ^^ Keep up the good work!!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee, this was an interesting read. I had taken a particular dislike to Neji in the series, but in this fic, I actually liked him. ^^ That says a lot, because usually I can't be swayed to like a character if I've already decided to say "boo!".
In short, I liked this, a whole lot. It was sexy and threesome was written nicely. I did get a little confused in a few areas of action, but it wasn't a big enough problem to detract from the overall enjoyment factor. ^_^
In short, I liked this, a whole lot. It was sexy and threesome was written nicely. I did get a little confused in a few areas of action, but it wasn't a big enough problem to detract from the overall enjoyment factor. ^_^
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September 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMFG you rock so much. and threesomes are really hard to do... you portrayed one really well. reading this was SO much better than homework :D
wow... i really don't know what to say. feeling festively gay after this, perhaps i could discribe it as "fabulous"? yes, that seems right. fabulous... i highly doubt there would be any sleepover to speak of if this were canon, but screw the facts, right? 'sides, threesomes don't happen in Naruto either, so TECHINICALLY... it all fit! :D and i'm sooo so glad Gaara was included, he was so cute in this... Neji was smexy, and he reacted nicely to the kiss. i see Gaara as SOOO uke, too. muwahaha. and Shika would totally make the first move. love it love it love it!! <3 <3 <3
wow... i really don't know what to say. feeling festively gay after this, perhaps i could discribe it as "fabulous"? yes, that seems right. fabulous... i highly doubt there would be any sleepover to speak of if this were canon, but screw the facts, right? 'sides, threesomes don't happen in Naruto either, so TECHINICALLY... it all fit! :D and i'm sooo so glad Gaara was included, he was so cute in this... Neji was smexy, and he reacted nicely to the kiss. i see Gaara as SOOO uke, too. muwahaha. and Shika would totally make the first move. love it love it love it!! <3 <3 <3
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know...the combination of neji, shikamaru, and gaara is a bit strange for me. i almost passed on reading this for that very reason. but my curiosity was piqued, so i read it. and i must say that was really very nicely done. the lemon was well-written, the descriptions made everything so much easier to imagine, but without coming across as forced. i like how this story flowed naturally. well...as naturally as it could with three woe-begotten guys who are drunk off of sake. but i hope you get my point. anyways...glad to see both neji got to let out some of his frustration, gaara got a hug (and so much more), and shikamaru...well, maybe he's not so lazy after all. toodles!
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September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was cool. Shikamaru is my favourite character and and i just loved how ou paired him up with Gaara and Neji!!!! I could have wished for Shika-kun to be a little more submesive though but it doesn't matter!! I loved this!!!!! Are you going to make another one?? PLease say you will!!!!!
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg! that was the BEST threesome I ever read! ^O^ I wish/hope you'll continue it! It's so awesome, and adding Gaara was very unexpected (never heard of Shika/Gaa before!) Great job on the lemon!
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! This was fantastic! What a great story, and great pairing! Gaara, Shikamaru, Neji...what more can a girl want? Way hot...hope to see more of this kinda thing from you in the future! Wonderful job!