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Wow, Sasori did somethiong good for once... I'm impressed. The funny thing is, you said waltzing at a certain point and I could see Itachi and Sasuke throwing away their weapons and start dancing the English waltz. Silly me...^^;;
Please continue this story. I love this pairing. ^^V

I like this , I will defently wait for the next part. What will people say when they find out that Sasuke did a forbiddin justu to keep his brother with him?

what would Orachi, Kabuto the rest of the Akustui as well as the village of the leafs . I hope the next chapter has all that as well as some good lemon smut.

how could you say the story isn't good!! your not even to main stuff and i'm already hooked!! you have to update my life is on the lineO.O!!!! i will love you forever!!! O.O

Brillant! This is SO interesting! The idea is INGENIUS! And your writing is beautiful. *inserts lots of hearts* Please update ASAP! ><

I am so HAPPY to read something written by you again. And it starts VERY promising~ Really LOVED the beginning of this fic so far. It's more than interesting~ And I will never get bored by ItaSasu or your fanfics *loves*. They are ALWAYS brilliant~

this is beautiful...i mean amazing please continue this...the first chapter alone was overwhelming, please continue this fic and update soon..i love these sort of themes...and itachi...and uchihacest lol...great job so far on this one !!! ^^

Oh yeah! I love this fic so far! Your writing is amazing, and I absolutely love how you wrote out the fight scene. The details were superb, and the idea of tying the brother's lives together is a great idea. Keep going please; I can't wait until you update!!

Well,the cat is back.Scrumptious idea,the two are joined even closer.The flow wasn't bad at all.It is better to write then not after all.I like it and am going back to read it again.Thanks.

Cool.
Take out all those povs, to many, it get's really anoying at times.

Bored with this pairing???????????HaH!Not a chance!"this most" fits more accuratly then"one of the most " if you want to keep "twisted yet beautiful...." without adding anything.{second last sentence}and it would be in it's" tragic aesthstic " not "tragic-ly aesthetics",{in the paragraph that first names Sasori,9th or so...} there are a couple more but they do not stop the flow much .I am not sure if you want feedback like this,I would rather have you write new stuff then fix old stuff personally...but this is always a reference to come back to...your call...