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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good chapter. I would like to read more. I hope you write another chapter. I like your style of writing
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Freaking awesome!! I love how descriptive you are and how you kept the character's personalities intact. WOnderful!! Such passion, and it totally fits them. So cool that his dad just let it go, nothing like a father. I hope that you do another chapter.
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great - GREAT - fic. Write more.
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October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I'm not trying to write a book report here so I'm just gonna say it was pretty awesome in all aspects. Keep it up, becaues I'm definitly looking forward to future chapters.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
absolutely fabulous. I really love how you keep a constant sence of character between Shikamaru and Temari. I did miss hearing Shikamaru mumbling "trublesome" a little in the second chapter, but the shower scene made up for it big time. I hope you write a third installment of this, I really do. I also hope you write more storries with different couplings. couplings that some of the more traditional fans would like. like Naru/Hina ^_^... sorry... personal thoughts.
but the storry's great KEEP IT UP
but the storry's great KEEP IT UP
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story, please continue.
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October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy... Sheiot!
Ye gods, do I ever love a good Shikamaru/Temari fic. And you, you are a Master if this couple. If you can see it in your heart to continue this fic for a few more chapters, or write more excellent stories, I know that I, for one, would be in your debt. There is so much smut. So little story with porn in it. You have a plot beyond reproach. Your command of the mindset of both Temari and Shikamaru is unparalleled.
Ye gods, do I ever love a good Shikamaru/Temari fic. And you, you are a Master if this couple. If you can see it in your heart to continue this fic for a few more chapters, or write more excellent stories, I know that I, for one, would be in your debt. There is so much smut. So little story with porn in it. You have a plot beyond reproach. Your command of the mindset of both Temari and Shikamaru is unparalleled.
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October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first fanfic I ever read on AFF...and so far its my fave...I mean Shikamaru and Temari are my fave Naruto couple EVER...but this was great, it's well written and not boring, I loved it, you go hunny cause you knew what you were doing when you wrote this!!! lol
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude..... All i can say is..... OMG OMG OMG OMG THIS FIC IS AWESOME!!!!! PLEASE CONTINUE..... ANOTHER CHAPTER WOULD BE SUPER KOOL!!!
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No complaints...need more shika-temari stuff...