rate_review Reviews

This story was a sexual masterpiece. I loved the mounting sexual tensions that the author worked to create in the first couple chapters. They were just two boys playing in the woods until they started having wayward thoughts of affection and sexual desire. Suddenly, the reader is thrown into the violent splashing of water as the boys enjoy a little more than childish interaction. I must admit that, though I am not gay, some of the author's depictions of the boys' encounter made me aroused. The only complaint I have with this story is the sexual irresponsibility of the two; neither cared about protection and/or aids. Remember kids, always be careful in those situations. In general though, I really enjoyed this piece; sexual tension, fused with sarcasm, and a powerful release, all add up to a successful adult ficion story.

*grins* Nice. More? *looks hopeful*

I really liked it alot never Thought I'd be satisfied with a one-shot but I was great job

Arry

O.O oh my...*mops up bloody nose* That was great! *hands you a Sasuke doll* Here you, use it to hit people. Its a present because your wonderful fic! I almost died of blood loss but it wouldn't be a bad way to go. I can see the headlines now:

Girl Dies Ealier Today After Bleeding Unstoppably From the Nose. Police Blame Incrediable fic She was Reading and Are Currently Looking For the Author For Questioning. (sidenote) 4 Other Police in Hostpital Receiving Treatment After Reading a Paragraph. Critical Condition.

Keep up the good work *Tackles and Glomps* Ja ne! =3

nice fic you should keep going and make somthing dramatic happens that'll keep readers hoked

Neat,I have read one like it before but the other was 2 chaps and had a more experianced writer,so I do like this kind of pwp.Love it in fact.I could read about those two going at it all day...and I do occasionally.Want to see more of what you can do.

^_^ this was so good! Really cute and hot at the same time :D I hope you've written more, I'll go check it out right after this... and if you haven't written anything besides this: go and do it now! You are a very good lemon writer ^_^

Omigawd!! That was so hawt!!!! xD-Adds to Favorites- More SasuNaru!!