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Poor Jiraiya!
He gets sick every time he tries to take care of Yondaime. XDD

Very cute. I enjoyed this.

wow ... quite the pairing, but i loved it!!
Great fic

This is the first fic of this pairing that I've ever seen...good job!

I'm begging you to write more, that was really hot. Also, there arn't enouph Jiraiya fics in the world, or at least not good ones.

I've never read this pairing before, but yours was amazing! I hope you have some more stuff I can read ^^

Well, I've actually read this a couple times by now! ^_^; Such an interesting pairing, and put together in such a neat way, who could resist? I wondered how Jiraiya x Yondaime would work, and this gave me a (suprisingly believable) answer! I think the funniest thing here was Yondaime's teasing of his poor (former) sensei. This is the type of story that really makes you question the uke and the seme when the uke is doing almost all the work! We need to have another chapter for Jiraiya's "treatment", now!

Loved the steamyness, and I hope to see more of this pairing in the future. You've definitely gotten me hooked on this unlikely couple. ^^

omg, this was just hilarious and SO HAWT! *drools* well worth reading! =^______^=

Oohhh! That was sooooo cute & hot & cuddy!!! :3

There should be more Jiraiya x Yondaime fic out there >>;; *looks for some* Hehe...

~the Seph

Too lazy to sign in! Sorry! XD Anyways, I <3 X3 Jiraiya is teh hotness (for his age! XD;;;). And Yondaime is teh too! *_* I just want to say, I loved the smutness your wrote! And if ever possible, you should write another, not necessarily smut (although, it's a plus! :p), but another JiraixYondai! ^_^

That was in one word....(or two X3) absolutely adorable ^-^
Loved very muchly!
And yesh yondy's hot =^_^=