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February 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey dile, WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN?????
i would love to help ya!! JUST GET BACK HERE!!!!
~_^
Mizuki
i would love to help ya!! JUST GET BACK HERE!!!!
~_^
Mizuki
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June 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! I like the beginning. Please continue! :)
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February 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
An absolutely great beginning! Good writing, flow, and insight of the characters. I would really love to see you continue this story!
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February 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please continue this one... its very interesting and well thought of. It would be a pity not to continue... finally a well thought of threesome...come on... I wanna know what's next...please?? *bribes with cookies*
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like. It's well written, sakura feels in character but stronger and more determined like I'm hoping she'll get. I can't wait to meet your sasuke and naruto cause I like your description of them at the demolitions. Question is can sasuke or naruto admit fellings for one another without alot of arguing and bumbling? I'd like to see how sakura deals with two of the most stubborn ninjas in the world.
*bows down and offers soft plushie penguin* please more.
*bows down and offers soft plushie penguin* please more.
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October 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this could turn into a very good fic. The writing so far is awesomeness ^^ you had better update it! It's hard to review one chapter :P
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September 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like this story. Why didn't you keep going on it? writers block or something? If you can please get the next chapter out soon or when you can. I want to know what happens next. Can't wait to read it. SMILE ^_~
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August 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aw! PLEASE CONTINUE! This was very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Also, I loved your use of Sakura’s ‘voice’ (so to speak), it offered great insight into her character and the nature of the Team 7 dynamic.
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November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your kind review!
I really enjoyed reading this chapter of the story. I like how Sakura is logical, actually using her brain as opposed to her overactive imagination and Inner Sakura, and is finding answers in things I don't think she ever would normally. I never would have thought the Sannin were attracted to each other, but the way you wrote it made it more than plausible. :-) Excellent.
I hope to keep reading stuff you write!
WS (getting busy)
I really enjoyed reading this chapter of the story. I like how Sakura is logical, actually using her brain as opposed to her overactive imagination and Inner Sakura, and is finding answers in things I don't think she ever would normally. I never would have thought the Sannin were attracted to each other, but the way you wrote it made it more than plausible. :-) Excellent.
I hope to keep reading stuff you write!
WS (getting busy)
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope this'll be a long fic. The premise seems very interesting. Keep it up.