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*pumps fist in air* hell yeah, I promote myself as your NAG. You are SO right, Sakura DOES get shortchanged, although now I've heard that she played a staring role in the later mange (I've only read up to 199). So, I'm extremely happy to hear about that. Still...she needs more cameos. Ah, I adore your story, may I bow to your genius? *bows* I want an update...please gimme an update? *pouts* I shall go all Inner Ame on you! Actually, I won't because my Inner Ame happens to be extremely pissy today and I wouldn't let her out anyway. Ah, I'm obsessed! Anyway, great characterization, I can hear Sakura's voice in your writing, which is excellent because some stories make her OOC and it annoys me. Genius plot so far, I await another update AS SOON as possible! ^_^ good day!

~Ame ^_~

as always your work is beautiful! and you draw some very nice conclusions. I like the Sakura-ness :) Poor girl...always getting picked on. Your little details are are a treat! Her realizations seemed very well thought out. The Sannin parallels are nice too...Oro/Jiraiya...gak! Xb but it seems logical though. XD Well, good job, good luck and all that jazz. Looking forward to more!

This has the beginings of a really great story. keep up the good work, I cant wait to see more.

But ive already read ch.1 wheres ch.2. I wanna know what happens next. Waaaaaaaaahhhhhhh

Yes. That, that, exactly like that. More. Soon. Very, very soon.

Please?

OOOOHH its gonna be exciting!! X3 please continue!! i waana see this whole Master plan!! XD *is in love*

It hadn't taken much hard thinking for her to see Sasuke's love for Naruto after that story, once she'd recovered from the sheer revulsion of Orochimaru and, gah, Jiraiya getting it on. Tsunade made it a seriously brain-scarring…

I laughed way too much at that - the whole flow of thought, with such charming little euphanisms like that, was totally Sakura - girly, but unpolished. Me like, me like, me looking out for more - see? My brain's died from the anticipation and I've lapsed into bad grammar...can anyone else hear the grammar nazi coming to get me?

Seriously though, I'm impressed. Drawing parallels worked wonderfully and you made this all seem plausible (who am I kidding? We all know it's damn near to canon...) I'm looking forward to seeing more. A lot more I hope.

And yes!!!!! for England winning the ashes. Britain comes alive again XD

You are off to a great start already! I can't wait to read more, because if the other chapters can stand up to this one then you have the beginnings of a truly awesome fic on your hands. Great job so far, and keep up the good work. :)

then what happins and then what happins?????

o this could be good. if its not all the fun bits are m/m. more m/f combinations than m/m at 2 to 1. and i could harras you to put this out if you need