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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A Saki fic.Ohhhhhhhhh,I'd love to read that.The first chap of L&S ia my all time fav.A hem.....This is a fic for which there is a definite need,I agree.Bravo for tackling it.You are fun to read,pithy.I wish you luck with your search for a ...minder of sorts.Be back soon!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm looking forward to more of this one. You have a nice, clean style that fun and easy to read. It flows very nicely. I love the Team 7 threesomes and there are only like 2 or 3 of them. Thanks a bunch!
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1 is full of plot development, and I love every bit of it! I find it sad that so many authors like to write annoying/weepy Sakuras, and completely shove her to the side in their stories. Of course, stories involving all three members of team 7 getting together would naturally exclude those authors...which is good, because any combination of Naruto, Sasuke and Sakura is my favorite OT3^_^.
I also find it sad that so many authors just make up some random thing and have the characters hop into bed. I'm going to stop 'finding things sad' because the point is that all the stories I've read from you (a grand total of 2, this and Weapons Check), lacked all the things that make me sad and have all the things that make me happy, including great characterization, amazing turns of phrase, and strong, believable plot.
As I'm sure other people have offered, I wouldn't mind being a nag/pal, though I'm not that terribly at conspiring.^_^ My email addy is above, and I'm friendly and not prone to biting.
Chai
I also find it sad that so many authors just make up some random thing and have the characters hop into bed. I'm going to stop 'finding things sad' because the point is that all the stories I've read from you (a grand total of 2, this and Weapons Check), lacked all the things that make me sad and have all the things that make me happy, including great characterization, amazing turns of phrase, and strong, believable plot.
As I'm sure other people have offered, I wouldn't mind being a nag/pal, though I'm not that terribly at conspiring.^_^ My email addy is above, and I'm friendly and not prone to biting.
Chai
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Sakura is so cool and came to her realizations nicely. Team 7 is so OT3. I love the way the plot is building up so nicely (not that I wouldn't turn down a well written PWP but plot is very, very good.) And you included Jiraiya/Orochimaru! With Tsunade. Yes!
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Yeah, I'm so not coherent at this moment. Blame it on college.
Anyway, you're also writing a Saki-chan piece? Asuka is definitely taking over the fandom. I look forward to seeing that. With your writing you're right up there with Asuka herself and I'm sure your addition to the Saki-chan revolution will be absolutely wonderful.
I hope to see more of this and the other pieces you've mentioned. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or anything I'd love to. Sometimes having someone else to talk at works wonders for a story that's stuck. Feel free to contact me if you want.
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Yeah, I'm so not coherent at this moment. Blame it on college.
Anyway, you're also writing a Saki-chan piece? Asuka is definitely taking over the fandom. I look forward to seeing that. With your writing you're right up there with Asuka herself and I'm sure your addition to the Saki-chan revolution will be absolutely wonderful.
I hope to see more of this and the other pieces you've mentioned. If you want someone to bounce ideas off of or anything I'd love to. Sometimes having someone else to talk at works wonders for a story that's stuck. Feel free to contact me if you want.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! That was pretty swell!
I loved how you put a plot on your story and not jumped straight to the sex, and your writting of sakura's toughts seems pretty reasonable. I can't wait to read more from you! Congrats!
I loved how you put a plot on your story and not jumped straight to the sex, and your writting of sakura's toughts seems pretty reasonable. I can't wait to read more from you! Congrats!