rate_review Reviews

Hey, nice fic! Simple, but fun and sexy. Plus, I was missing the 'classical' couples around here. I say yes to some ministories of the aftermath, but only if you really want to write them, not just because we ask for them. Forcing stories out is asking for bad results.

:D Nicely done! I had to listen to the song while reading your story, it adds to the feel, you should stick it in the A/N, I think that's what made it more enjoyable for me x333. If there were any grammar mistakes, I guess I didn't see them due to the fact that I was skimming over the text so I could get to who's singing what and the lyrics....the only downside of listening to the music while reading the story. xD

Very cool idea, you should add what they all did in extra chapters...That would be hot. :D Good job!

nice nice cant wait for the next chapter dudes woot !!!!!

Ummm.......I think,the line goes "on her black satin sheets is where he started to freak...more,more,more" ect in the "Pink" section.