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by insomniac247

person azuuei
schedule February 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Amusing. *laughs*
That was funny! =3

OK ok ok.. I guess it's pretty obvious. I'm now one of your avid fans.

*creates banner*
Black Sheep is L-O-V-E
Oh yes. You ARE love.
Keep `em coming. We'll keep on lovin'. Err.. Or something like that. *hugs*
schedule December 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Wish there was more though.
person Kireiko
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O___o!! Well. I wasn't originally going to check this story out, seeing as much as I love to hate Orochimaru... he, well, still gives me the creeps some time. A very invaluable character to the Naruto series, make no mistake, but still... something about that man... says: creepy. And sometimes not in a good way. ;)

Anywho, checking out who the author was, well, I definitely had to have a peek since it also included Sasuke (poor boy;) ) and I must say, it was a well written piece. Perhaps this is the story that couldn't escape your thoughts most recently? *devilish grin* Now, I see why.... heh.

The tension was palpable, the desire was definite and the wanting was painfully obvious. Of course said object of desire and wanting and sexual frustration would no doubt cause any woman, or man in this case, to fall to their respective knees... I guess what I'm trying to say is that I liked it. I normally don't read oro/anybody fics, but this is a well written, highly deserving of praise. That, and I'm a fan of your work and you always do so well.... I'm jealous T___T

all jokes aside, nicely done! keep up the good work.

~Kir
person Hellagoddess
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*bloody tissue no jutsu* Ohmygod! Update! UPDATE GODDAMN YOU TEBAYO!!!!!

Hellagoddess
person no name for now
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story; yay for pervert Orochimaru! Thank you for writing this.
person Hollowcat
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was just getting good! You should have gone on! I hate you! *cries* Whyyyyyy! please add on to this! I beg of you!! Please! More! XD XD XD
person V
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay~ u updated! I have waited for chapter 2 for so long, but that's ok. I enjoyed reading it. This is what I have been looking for, a chess game! teasing at first but gets more exciting at the end part. good work! are u planning to write more on this? If you do, I'll of corse continue reading.~
person Raina
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*shivers and shivers and shudders*

I can't believe I read this. Poor Sasuke.... bet you wish you'd stayed in Konoha didn't you? Does revenge on Itachi look any better? I don't see how this could turn into a Sasuke/Sakura.... not after having his first sexual experience be so horribly traumatizing. Unless it works the other way, making him want the gentle touch of a woman instead. *shrugs* And you're right....Sasuke would not share in this relationship willingly even if he did like men.
person Billy
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was so fucking hot so awesome.
This is so not a one-shot, there has to be more.
person blisblop
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this alot.Fantastic idea and seems very likely as Orochimaru is insane but also very playful and often takes defeats he could have avoided yet he was having too much fun.Sasuke sounds like he has gone beyond sex god and is now a sex monster.He also sounds very sheltered which is good to hear.God I miss that little bugger,hear me gods of manga!!!