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This story is really interesting and has kept my attention through all ten chapters. I was almost put-off by the purple prose (which there's a lot of in the beginning, but thankfully less as you progress through the chapters), but you've got a great plot working here. I hope there's more to this coming soon! I want Kakashi to make another attempt with Sasuke; another attempt to battle his dysfunction. Whatever you write next... I'll be looking forward to it!

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wow this is really good! ive been reading the story nonstop!! the way you write is nothing but extraordinary, and i think you're writing gives good judgement to kakashi-san and sasuke's undeveloped relationship in the series. wow, i certainly love uke-sasuke's, and this is the first time ive read a kakasasu.. not to mention the first time i thought of iruka as annoying -sorry. oohhh i wish ive learned of it sooner.. XD i love yah!!! uchicest and uke-sasuke's the best!

That last line was good. Lol.

Great chapter, you write the characters so well! I have trouble sometimes -_-U

Anyways, what's gonna happen next? Update soon!

"Yeah well if he's so great then why don't you MARRY him?!"

Yeah, Kakashi, why don't you? ;-)

I'm in a huge rush, so I can't say much. I especially loved the first scene of Kakashi talking to Obito (or himself? Whichever way you want to see it, I guess). And those last couple paragraphs of Sasuke's thoughts had me staring at my screen screeching, "WHAT? There's no more?!" Thanks for the update! I'll be here when you update again, as always.

-NightsEnd

I ended up spraying my computer monitor with pepsi when I saw that you had updated. Much love to you.

Both Sasuke and Kakashi are confused now....and, forgive my stupidity, who are the two new people to be infatuated by Sasuke? Well, guess Kakashi had better make another move soon, ne? I wonder what will happen when he trains his Top Rookie for the chuunin exam...(brain implodes from effort)

I love the characterizations of this story. Your angst-queen!Sasuke and selfdestructive!Kakashi are some of the best I've seen. If only you could work with Kishimoto-sensei...well, the series would be pretty damn close to perfect. I apologize for the general meaninglessness of this review...it's getting fairly late over here.

To sum everything up: Excellent work, as always, and I'll be here waiting for the next update. (thumbs up) You can't get rid of me, mwhahaha.

Iruka and Kakashi!Bleck.Well they are about as exciting as I have always thought.Not at all.I liked Kakashi's attitude towards Sasuke until the masturbation bit,he is stepping out of character for this story's version of him.Why?Having any fantasy while masterbating is not sick(or writing it for that matter,smirk),why drag Iruka into this...and Sasuke watched it?Snore..Well we missed the next times,maybe they where better.Back to them and Kakashi enjoying Sasuke.PLEASE.

Hehe, mmm, Iruka does seem a bit of a mother hen sometimes doesnt he? *huggles you* excellent chapter!

Omg..I told you before that I didn't know enough words to describe how much I love this fic but good god... -swoons and comes close to fainting- Just...water and...hot..Kakashi...combined with...Uchiha..and...teh schmex... -finally faints and lies there with a dirty grin on his face- This was sooo worth waiting for...

AN UPDATE! (falls off of chair) You have no idea how happy you've made me. This is most likely the best KakaSasu story I've had the pleasure to read. I love the characterizations most of all. Gai always makes me laugh. XD Excellent work!