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for Found You

by theyoungestuchiha

person NSU
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Squee! It's so unusual to see a gen fic like this here, but it's nice to get some variety. Um, I have a few questions for you, if you don't mind. First, if these take place during the time skips, does this mean you'll eventually reach the training month before the final chuunin exam? And are you basing this off the manga or the anime? If the anime, will you also be doing eps. 101, when Sasuke is supposed to be following Kakashi? Er, final question, although it may be a bit rude . . . is English your primary language? Some of your grammar is a bit off, but I'm overly sensitive to that. Anyway, hope you update again soon!
person MoJo JessJo
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another chapter makes me happy!

Once again I'm really liking this story a lot! And your grasp of the characters is quite good and enjoyable same as this chapter's plotline!
person Lell
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The instantaneous wrath was released as a doink of dinner roll bouncing off his silver head.

*Chortles* My stomach hurts from laughing...

Interesting chapter on unseen canon (if that makes any sense) The last section after the flashback scenes were by far my favourite (not to mention highly amusing...)
person blisblop
schedule September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty subtle.I can't wait to see if Kakashi will be as sad if he decides Sasuke is his teacher also ... might change the removal of headgear....frankly such a convaluted man is best balenced by a blunt(not stupid ) character.Whee ha this is fun (Sasuke on his back,stretched) and funny(Naruto with a crossbow to the crotch).Sakura is...just Sakura,not less not more,for which I am grateful.
person kasumi
schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! one of the funniest fics EVER! imagine, sasuke in kitty form *cuddles uchiha kitty* so cute!
person blisblop
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was an unexpected pleasure.It left me with a wonderful feeling that even knowing how this ends doesn't mar the effect,umm, I guess I don't know how this ends, being a fan fic ,so scratch that.I could just eat Sasuke but you have made him so unavoidably a child I'll just look...maybe a lick or two.Sigh,great work,so finely balenced.Glad you got it up.Yup,very.Of course another one off where they get ,closer ,would be greeted with enthusiasim.Normally this pairing is too unbalenced to work but here...My fav other than this is 'The Bell" and there is a multi part one where Kakashi has him show up out of no where and has to mind him,perhaps someone else can remember the name of that one.
person Just_me
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I find this story so kawaii. It gave me all kinds of Sukeneko images and all other things my kind kicked up...:3
Ah, and the waking up together.... utterly cute.... and I should seriously get that word out of my system... but your story just is cute...
write more ^^V
person allyluv
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice! please write more naruto fanfics.
person Just Someone Esle
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^.^ Really cute fiction. I "awwed" out loud at the part where Kakashi was drying off Sasuke's hair. ^-^ So cute! You wrote their characters really well. Kakashi is such an ass. XD And Sasuke's still a cute bastard. Gragh. XD

Really good story, I loved it. Write more!
person crystal
schedule September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww, that was really cute~~ The language was a bit hard to follow in the beginning, but the writing is well thought out. @__@ Really would love it if you would write more, with more lemony content too!