rate_review Reviews

That was very sweet. Just try not to use the phrase "right there and then" Everyone over uses that. But good job.

aww.. thats so cute!

OMG YAR!!! That was so cuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuutttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeee!!!!! I lurve it! :D

There is nothing more inspiring than unbridled affection centered in true love. In her last piece, The Rivalry, the author depicts the boys' love as casual and dangerous; in this piece, the author explores a new realm - love. Having been together for 3 months, the boys now feel more than the deep sexual urges which tremble through their errogenous zones; they feel the unadulterated bliss of acceptance and affection. With this new dimension added, the author makes the readers' hearts palpitate with anxiety and eyes water with uncontrolled fulfillment. By the time the boys begin having sex, the reader is emotionally tied to each of the characters. This piece is truly amazing because it ties together the sexual and emotional. The reader leaves completely fulfilled in every facet in which fulfillment is desireable.

I would like to apologize for the following typographical errors [note that the following are the correct spelling]:

Erogenous
Desirable

Smile away! I loved it ^^ It was very beautifully written.

that was a cute story about there aniversary and all there have been more to the story.